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Wed Sep 09, 2020 3:42 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



I'm sorry, I'm so confused... I thought Kassy was still at school, in the principal's office. Is she somewhere else?
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Wed Sep 09, 2020 3:49 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



My post involved her out of school. (Which is why I recommend a flashback to meeting the principal. I love using flashbacks, and they are quite effective tools in storybooks.)
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Wed Sep 16, 2020 1:42 pm
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HarryHardy says...



Heyy almost done with my post...where exactly should it end?

Would it be better to end it with Daisy getting her assignment and like getting into a car or should it end with her arriving on the scene where the school bus thing went down?
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Wed Sep 16, 2020 1:54 pm
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I would do it where she arrives, but it's up to you.
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Fri Sep 18, 2020 2:56 am
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Okay....once more an lovely coincidence because that's what I would have preferred xD or else this would be short.

Oh and I mentioned like a best friend in this post (who Daisy may or may not have a crush on) and Daisy's a little sad that said best friend is not going to also be sent on this mission. I hope that's okay...thought I'd add a little something for her to live for with her family being dead and all...also ya know in case we need more subplots to stretch out any part...and because I am cheesy sometimes...xD. I hope y'all don't mind.

Also post is done....currently being edited for spelling and stuff.

Update: I posted!
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Sun Sep 20, 2020 10:51 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



@HarryHardy it's great!

Also, who's going next?
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Thu Sep 24, 2020 3:54 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



@LZPianoGirl @kattee @Shadeflame which one of you folks wants to go next?

And @HarryHardy yes your thing with Daisy's friend not being sent on the mission and stuff is perfectly fine. In fact, it spices up the story a little bit, so I'm glad you added that. You all can write as many personal things and side plots with your characters as you want.
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Thu Sep 24, 2020 4:04 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



I would go next, but I really don't think I have the time. I could probably go sometime at the end of next week.
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Thu Sep 24, 2020 4:18 pm
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HarryHardy says...



@Necromancer14, thanks...I've been writing too much romance...someone help me

@LZPianoGirl, I think next post our characters will probably be meeting so we could collab on that scene?
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Wed Oct 14, 2020 1:53 pm
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Heyy...'tis been a while...who's supposed to be going next? If I recall correctly I think @LZPianoGirl's character and mine were supposed to meet?
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Wed Oct 14, 2020 2:01 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



Yeah... LZ said she was busy, so... I dunno.

@LZPianoGirl are you still too busy?
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Wed Oct 14, 2020 2:02 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



I'm a a bit busy this week, but I think I may have time to write a post. Otherwise, the quarter ends this Friday, so I can write it this weekend!
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Sun Oct 18, 2020 8:17 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Sorry guys, some plans came up today and I’m not sure if I’ll have time to post. If I don’t, is there anyway you could skip me? I know I’ve been holding the SB up and I’m really sorry about that.
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Sun Oct 25, 2020 5:13 am
HarryHardy says...



*pokes*

Heyy...so are you still busy @LZPianoGirl?...and if so what would be the way to go @Necromancer14?
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Sun Oct 25, 2020 1:59 pm
LZPianoGirl says...



Ahhh god, I'm so sorry. I keep forgetting about this SB. I think it'd be best if I drop out of it. Between work I have and my own SBs, I don't have the time for this one. I'm really, really sorry. If anyone wants to take over Kassy or just leave her as an NPC, please feel free to do so!
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