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Tue Jul 28, 2020 6:02 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



There I changed it again. You can edit it now.
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

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Tue Jul 28, 2020 6:09 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Alright, it's working! For some reason everybody but (I'm assuming) Necro is anonymous, but that's fine.
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Wed Jul 29, 2020 5:28 pm
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Alright! I finished my post. Who wants to go next? (We can discuss plot and stuff in the google doc.)
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

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Wed Jul 29, 2020 5:34 pm
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HarryHardy says...



I can go next.

What are the things that would need to be mentioned?
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Wed Jul 29, 2020 5:43 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



I can go after Harry, if that's alright!
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Wed Jul 29, 2020 6:16 pm
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The order so far: @Necromancer14, @HarryHardy, @LZPianoGirl,

And Harry basically you need to introduce your character, though I do have some ideas of what could happen.

So, since you work for the government, the government would probably get calls about "monsters attacking" and you get sent to investigate. Now, the person who made a call that you need to investigate I think should either be Kassandra or Cleopatra/Cleo's parents.

If it's Kassandra your character will learn about her mysterious powers and that could open up some interesting possibilities, maybe some suspense-inducing misunderstandings.

If it's Cleopatra your character will end up learning about the Cataclyx and end up coming into contact with Larry.

This shouldn't end up all happening in the first post, (it doesn't even have to happen at all if you have a better idea) but you should, as you introduce your character, maybe reveal a little background (not too much. You want to leave things to weave in later) and start your character on whatever path you want.

There. I don't know if that was helpful or answered your question Harry, but there's some of my scheming.

Also this doesn't only happen in Harry's posts; other characters can write about this too as they interact with Daisy.
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

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Wed Jul 29, 2020 7:03 pm
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HarryHardy says...



Okayy...will do @Necromancer14, I'll start with maybe a typical day for Daisy with some background for her and then i'll end the post with her getting summoned to her boss' office saying that its something important.
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Wed Jul 29, 2020 7:05 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



Sounds great @HarryHardy! I can't wait to read it.
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

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Wed Jul 29, 2020 7:22 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Sounds awesome, but where should I start after that? Just a normal day for Kassy and then something weird happens, like accidentally using her powers?
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Wed Jul 29, 2020 7:32 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



@LZPianoGirl that sounds good! And you can add foreshadowing or other things if you want to spice things up a tad.
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Fri Jul 31, 2020 1:59 pm
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HarryHardy says...



Okay I posted. See if its any good.
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Fri Jul 31, 2020 2:40 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



It's great! My dad is using my laptop for the rest of the day, so I'll try to get the next post out tomorrow!
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Fri Jul 31, 2020 2:47 pm
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Shadeflame says...



Yes, it looks good. So I should go after LZ?
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Sure, @Shadeflame! And then @kattee can go.

Also @HarryHardy yes it's good.
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Fri Jul 31, 2020 3:59 pm
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kattee says...



i'll try to start mine now since it's somewhat an introduction <3
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