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Sat Jul 18, 2020 3:57 pm
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LittleLee says...



I hope it isn't too much to ask but if you come up with some general world building points can you share it here?

I'm sorry I didn't earlier; we ought to make a pad where we can all work together.

Regarding the Cardinal thing; I was planning on making it a semi-tradition. In the sense that the first few Cardinals happened to be women, and as a result it became a norm for ruling. If that's a problem, I can change that.

And everyone else, please let me know your thoughts! And don't forget, you can all worldbuild however you want as long as what you make has some reason behind it. Heck, create a species, make an entire location, whatever.
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Sat Jul 18, 2020 11:48 pm
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kattee says...



For me, if it's by chance (turning into a tradition), then there's no problem with the cardinal set-up.

My part on the world building: I added a huge market situated in Glasglew street (a high street). The tradespeople or vendors are usually those who have (or claim to) innovative devices that they want to sell or be recognised by well-known corporations. I was thinking of making it the home for honing craftsmanship, engineering, and everything related to construction.

Meanwhile, scientists, chemists, and experiments/anything related to lab work are mostly & highly sponsored by the government (Prime Enforcers, Cardinal, etc.) because they are valuable. They're the reason why human civilization is alive to begin with.

Like what Lee said, you can add anything to this with what you see fit. Just please mention it here?

I hope I can hear everyone else's thoughts!
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Sun Jul 19, 2020 2:27 am
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KateHardy says...



Oh okay....I'll do some worldbuilding on the woods that my character lives in then. So far it's just a forest that wraps around the East side of Sector 2. I'll put more things in this post as I develop them.
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Sun Jul 19, 2020 3:43 am
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LittleLee says...



@HarryHardy , if it's outside the Sector, don't forget that bugs will keep attacking.

Kat, that's a great idea!
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Sun Jul 19, 2020 4:41 am
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@LittleLee I thought the fields outside the sector were kept clear of the insects. This forest is was meant to be an extension of said fields. Or are there no fields outside sector 2? Or did they stop using the pesticide?
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Sun Jul 19, 2020 4:56 am
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There will be fields, but since they're outside the walls there will inevitably be plenty of attacks as well. And the pesticides would have been stopped by now; very recently, because of the mutations, but stopped nonetheless.
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Oh okay I'll keep that in mind then. More excitement for my character. That's good because there's only so much you can write about living in a forest.
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Mon Jul 20, 2020 1:44 pm
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So....who's taking the next post?
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Tue Jul 21, 2020 12:57 am
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Teddybear says...



I can draft up a post if that works for y'all.
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@TheMultiColoredCyr , great!
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I have posted!
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LittleLee says...



Great!
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Tue Jul 21, 2020 6:51 pm
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KateHardy says...



So who's going next?
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Tue Jul 21, 2020 7:35 pm
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Shadeflame says...



I think it probably should be me. I'll get working on a post.
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Okay, I have posted.
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