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so I'm nexttt. Mine might take awhile. I have to finish my AVATS post first sorry.

That's no problem
Although, if anyone else wants to post, I guess that should be okay? As long as it doesn't coincide with a character's storyline or whatever.

I can go next. I think my character and Harry's are gonna meet up. Is that okay with you?

I've posted my part! A bit crude but I'll be editing it in the future.

Nice post!

Good work, Kattee!

Good job kat!

awww thank you all <3 <3 <3 It's been hard writing lately so your words really help.

Just poking this because it's been quiet. Who's going next?

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I'm not sure, who should go next? I'm not really sure where the plot is trying to build up to, so I don't know who would be able to writ ea post that would move us along the most, if you know what I mean.

Okay, I didn't really mention this; the idea is that eventually the government starts reaching out to these girls after a while. It's actually to help them, but there are parts in the government whose intentions are not so pure.

With that in mind, write away! I would personally prefer not to have the Cardinal in the "impure" side, but a Prime or so won't hurt.

And the bugs are becoming stronger. Much stronger. So attacks are getting worse, though the average citizen doesn't know it.

I suppose we can all take over other minor characters too?

Hmm....I guess we could..for like normal citizens or is it like government scouts for such people??

I think my character started heading back towards the wall so this would play in pretty well for her being detected or on the flip side I could maybe have her spot some bugs, I think I already mentioned that she noticed the bugs are increasing so I could maybe show that attacks are worse while someone inside still think the attacks are low to show that the people don't really know?

Aaand the question still remains...who shall post the next post?

Also I said I'll try to world build the woods a bit, sorry I didn't get around to it yet...I will eventually.

Maybe I could post next? I think I said mah gal is in the third sector thingy (I'm too tired for proper terminology rn), so maybe she can be among the first to get approached?

I can mention in my post that the bug attacks are still generally considered pretty low in the transition from her just doing her regular routine or whatever to her being approached by someone, perhaps in a bar, or a nightclub, where the noise level would almost ensure that their conversation would be just between Ruby and the one talking to her, since Ruby is most certainly not dumb enough to go somewhere private enough for a conversation like that with a strange government worker looking person.

If any of your characters are in the area, maybe they can have a cameo or something of the sort if you'd like?


Also, I just realized, Ruby's power allows her to gain complete conscious control of any system that is a natural part of her body. Hel's powers have her interrupting a system in the human body - giving a command to the cells that will cause the body to disintegrate - so it could, theoretically, be possible for Ruby, with a hell of a lot of focus and energy, to resist and survive brief contact with her. Though it would be a huge shock to Ruby's system, considering how powerful Hel's power is.

My point is, let me know what needs to be included and I might be able to draft something up soonish. School is starting up so it might take a little while, but I might as well get started if no one else is going to go.

Also, I just realized, Ruby's power allows her to gain complete conscious control of any system that is a natural part of her body. Hel's powers have her interrupting a system in the human body - giving a command to the cells that will cause the body to disintegrate - so it could, theoretically, be possible for Ruby, with a hell of a lot of focus and energy, to resist and survive brief contact with her. Though it would be a huge shock to Ruby's system, considering how powerful Hel's power is.

I was thinking the same thing when you first made her, haha. Hel is either going to hate her or really love her when they meet because of that.

So, Cyr, you'll write up the next post?