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Don't Look Further [DT]



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Wed Jul 17, 2019 2:35 pm
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Clairia says...



understandable. take ur time, saru <33
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  





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Fri Jul 19, 2019 10:57 am
Mageheart says...



Right now, I think I'll probably get my CP up on Sunday. I might be able to get it up sooner, but that's currently the one day of the week I don't have any plans. No matter what, I'll definitely have it up by Sunday night, just like you wanted. :)
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Fri Jul 19, 2019 12:36 pm
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awesome! thanks so much !
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  





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Sun Jul 21, 2019 2:29 pm
Mageheart says...



Jaylin's up! I had a lot of fun designing them, and I think they still fit with what you wrote in the WFP. <3
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roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Sun Jul 21, 2019 4:56 pm
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Clairia says...



omg! so excited to read <3
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  





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Sun Jul 21, 2019 4:58 pm
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All the CPs have been submitted!! I can now make the necessary changes to the first chapter.
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  





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Sat Jul 27, 2019 12:52 pm
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Clairia says...



Hi, everyone! The FINAL version of Cosette's first entry is in the WFP!
Before I publish it, however, I'm going to need everyone's approval that it's a-ok in regards to the following criteria:

1. Did the way [ I ] portrayed your character match the personality you gave them in your CP?
2. Were there any traces of godmodding or unnecessary conflict that should be edited?
3. Were there any general errors/little fixes that you'd like to resolved before publishing?

If there's anything you'd like to add in regards to that kind of stuff, please, by all means, let me know either here or on the WFP so those changes can be made!
Once I have everyone's certified approval (which you can give on this forum) the first chapter will be up!
ping list:
Spoiler! :

@Magestorrow @Ravenlord @Saruka @XxXTheSwordsmanXxX
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  





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Sat Jul 27, 2019 7:59 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Richard impersonator has my okay. XD
  





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Sat Jul 27, 2019 9:17 pm
Mageheart says...



I probably won't be able to read through the post today, but I should be able to check it over tomorrow or on Monday!
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roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Tue Jul 30, 2019 5:30 pm
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I'm sorry for taking so long to read it, but I finally read the draft of the post! It looks great. <3 I couldn't find any problems with how you portrayed Jay, and the post itself looked great to me.

I saw that I'm up next for posting this round. Just so I can start thinking about it now, what should I make sure to include in that post when it's my turn?
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roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Wed Jul 31, 2019 2:32 am
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Clairia says...



Thank you so much! I'm glad everything worked for you.

And there's nothing specific I can think of at the moment, but if you do have questions concerning the general lore of Chaefetis, please let me know.
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  





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Sat Aug 03, 2019 12:52 am
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Saruka says...



Everything looks great for Kayla! Sorry for the late response, I was on vacation!
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Sun Aug 04, 2019 3:04 am
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Clairia says...



No problem! And awesome!
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  





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Mon Aug 19, 2019 12:31 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I think the first post can be put up
  





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Wed Aug 21, 2019 12:54 am
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will do! i'll get right to it
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  








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