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Wed Jul 17, 2019 2:35 pm
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Daughter says...



understandable. take ur time, saru <33
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Fri Jul 19, 2019 10:57 am
Jaybird says...



Right now, I think I'll probably get my CP up on Sunday. I might be able to get it up sooner, but that's currently the one day of the week I don't have any plans. No matter what, I'll definitely have it up by Sunday night, just like you wanted. :)
Magestorrow → Jaybird
  





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Fri Jul 19, 2019 12:36 pm
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Daughter says...



awesome! thanks so much !
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Sun Jul 21, 2019 2:29 pm
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Jaylin's up! I had a lot of fun designing them, and I think they still fit with what you wrote in the WFP. <3
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Sun Jul 21, 2019 4:56 pm
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Daughter says...



omg! so excited to read <3
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Sun Jul 21, 2019 4:58 pm
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Daughter says...



All the CPs have been submitted!! I can now make the necessary changes to the first chapter.
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Sat Jul 27, 2019 12:52 pm
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Daughter says...



Hi, everyone! The FINAL version of Cosette's first entry is in the WFP!
Before I publish it, however, I'm going to need everyone's approval that it's a-ok in regards to the following criteria:

1. Did the way [ I ] portrayed your character match the personality you gave them in your CP?
2. Were there any traces of godmodding or unnecessary conflict that should be edited?
3. Were there any general errors/little fixes that you'd like to resolved before publishing?

If there's anything you'd like to add in regards to that kind of stuff, please, by all means, let me know either here or on the WFP so those changes can be made!
Once I have everyone's certified approval (which you can give on this forum) the first chapter will be up!
ping list:
Spoiler! :
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Sat Jul 27, 2019 7:59 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Richard impersonator has my okay. XD
  





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Sat Jul 27, 2019 9:17 pm
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I probably won't be able to read through the post today, but I should be able to check it over tomorrow or on Monday!
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Tue Jul 30, 2019 5:30 pm
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I'm sorry for taking so long to read it, but I finally read the draft of the post! It looks great. <3 I couldn't find any problems with how you portrayed Jay, and the post itself looked great to me.

I saw that I'm up next for posting this round. Just so I can start thinking about it now, what should I make sure to include in that post when it's my turn?
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Wed Jul 31, 2019 2:32 am
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Daughter says...



Thank you so much! I'm glad everything worked for you.

And there's nothing specific I can think of at the moment, but if you do have questions concerning the general lore of Chaefetis, please let me know.
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Sat Aug 03, 2019 12:52 am
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Saruka says...



Everything looks great for Kayla! Sorry for the late response, I was on vacation!
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Sun Aug 04, 2019 3:04 am
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No problem! And awesome!
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Mon Aug 19, 2019 12:31 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I think the first post can be put up
  





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Wed Aug 21, 2019 12:54 am
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Daughter says...



will do! i'll get right to it
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