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Fri Aug 30, 2019 8:03 am
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TinkerTwaggy says...



@ScarlettFire I'm fine with it! Though, I do wonder why my character is apparently Aranthel now and Astral has Anelmok, in the post order
(I mean I don't mind, the guy's beautiful, but it's not my kind of theft, I prefer TVs)
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Fri Aug 30, 2019 8:24 am
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ScarlettFire says...



Oh, lol. I probably messed that up. Stupid dyslexia. I'll fix it later. XD
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Fri Aug 30, 2019 8:35 am
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FlamingPhoenix says...



Yeah this works for me, just let me no when you want me to post. ;)
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Fri Aug 30, 2019 9:14 am
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TinkerTwaggy says...



@ScarlettFire Yeah, like, how dare you have literally one of the worst possible problems to have when you're a writer, it's absolutely unacceptable!
But yeah, no worries! (Like sleep, get cat cuddles and THEN fix it. But focus on the cat cuddles. Please. XD)
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Fri Aug 30, 2019 10:39 am
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@TinkerTwaggy, I noticed that as well, but I can't tell you how much the TV comment made me break myself. :smt043
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Sat Aug 31, 2019 1:48 pm
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Europa says...



Depending on how long Kiera's post takes, I may need to go a little later since I'm also working on a bunch of posts for other SBs.
  





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Mon Sep 16, 2019 12:34 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



Okay so I'm finally done with my second Dragon Ability, Charm and Dragon Treasure! I'll list 'em once I get back home!

@AstralHunter Okay good, you noticed too. Is this a sign? XD
AND GLAD YOU ENJOYED THE JOKE, I HONESTLY TRY
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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I am double-posting for the sake of upholding my promise!


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Dragon Talent 2: Wind Generation

Cimetronelle can generate powerful wind-based projectiles from her roars, breaths, claws, wings and the tip of her tail. She can use this power in a variety of ways but usually uses it for bursts of speed, quicker flight and the creation of wind bolts or blades. If she changes the shape of her body using her Scale Manifestation, the shape, power, and effects of her wind projectiles will also vary.

Charm: Jewel of Liyaha
A necklace shaped like a pointy, T-shaped pink sword. It allows Anel to summon/conjure an enchanted whitish-colored helmet with fang-like structures for cheek protection, as well as a visor to protect his eyes. A pinkish, feathery strand of artificial hair comes out of the back, completing his armor into a deceiving knightly style, both practical and still allowing him to appear deceivingly trustworthy.

Dragon Treasure: Mark of Palayume

A feather-shaped tattoo carved inside the skin of Cimetronelle's left front paw, enchanted to emit a faint glow at night for her to gaze at. It was given to Cimetronnelle by one of the dragons she spent nights during her wanders: one named Palayume.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Sun Oct 06, 2019 5:54 pm
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AstralHunter says...



Oi, @ScarlettFire, maybe you should create an SB challenge to motivate people to write for this. ;P
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Sun Oct 06, 2019 10:10 pm
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ScarlettFire says...



That’s a good idea, @AstralHunter! XD
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Sun Oct 06, 2019 11:44 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



I mean, I'm just waiting for my turn, really, bit uh, good point
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Mon Oct 07, 2019 12:53 pm
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AstralHunter says...



I'm pretty sure it's post as you please at this point? We're simply doing opening posts, and with winter's prologue-y first post already submitted, we can go whenever we like. Finding the time, alas, is the issue. :smt024
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
- Paul the Apostle

Spring has returned! Winter is over, and BrumalHunter is no more!
  








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