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Fri Jul 12, 2019 9:32 am
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ScarlettFire says...



@AstralHunter added!
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Sat Jul 13, 2019 8:31 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



@AstralHunter, he will go by Mallon. They may call him Mal for short, but in order to keep his loyalty to the Conclave a secret, he can’t tell them the Conclave changed his name, otherwise they’ll think the Conclave changed him. I would actually like to play the idea of some of the people from the Council recognizing him because until the age of eight, when he was taken by the Conclave, he grew up with them and trained with them.
  





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Sun Jul 14, 2019 1:09 pm
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AstralHunter says...



@winterwolf0100, that makes sense!

@ScarlettFire, I should probably claim Aran's charm. XD

Charm
Pretty Silk Scarf — A dark pink silk scarf that fades into red at the ends and carries a simple enchantment that grants minor magical protection. Sezheren bought it for Aran from a travelling pixie merchant long ago.
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Sun Jul 14, 2019 1:17 pm
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ScarlettFire says...



Congratulations, Adventures!
You Have Reached Level Three!




Your Rewards Are Outlined Below:
  • 75 Tari
  • 1 Ability (Dragon)

These Rewards Apply To All Characters

Good Luck!


Please give me a detailed description of your Dragon's Treasure and Abilities and your Rider's Charm and Talents if you haven't already so that I can c/p it into the tome, thanks!

Charms are likely to be something small that can be attached to a weapon or a bag, maybe even a piece of jewelry. If you're not sure, just ask!
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Sun Jul 14, 2019 1:24 pm
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AstralHunter says...



...Seriously? This keeps happening to me! Each time I claim or want to claim something, I find I need to claim something else again soon thereafter. XD

Having said that, are we allowed to claim something like fire breath now? (Just the regular breath weapon.)
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Sun Jul 14, 2019 1:25 pm
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ScarlettFire says...



I imagine that's a standard, @AstralHunter XD
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Sun Jul 14, 2019 1:41 pm
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AstralHunter says...



It would have helped if you had told us that! XD

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Cleansing Fire — Sezhen can breathe fire not only to destroy, but also to preserve. He can breathe white flames onto Aran or anyone else to heal injuries and dispel disease for as long as the fire is sustained.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Sun Jul 14, 2019 1:44 pm
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ScarlettFire says...



Sorry, @AstralHunter XD You know now! Also, added that ability!
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Sun Jul 14, 2019 1:59 pm
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Okay, Tome should be updated! Please double-check to make sure I haven't missed anything!
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Sun Jul 14, 2019 3:27 pm
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AstralHunter says...



The experience farming is real. ;P @ScarlettFire, you missed a couple hyphens! (Specifically "sunset-orange" for the Wizard's Hat and "burgundy-dyed" for the Hardened Leather Cuirass.) How could you?! D: XD
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Sun Jul 14, 2019 3:32 pm
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ScarlettFire says...



@AstralHunter because I like s y m m e t r y lol. I'll add them back in now. XD
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Sun Jul 14, 2019 4:04 pm
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Aduna has the ability to shoot long scales from her tail. Their sharp points a deadly weapon.
  





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Sun Jul 14, 2019 4:10 pm
ScarlettFire says...



Thanks, @FlamingPhoenix.

Remember: your Riders have Two Talents and your Dragons have Two Abilities. Please check the Tome to make sure you've got that filled out!
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Sun Jul 14, 2019 4:19 pm
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AstralHunter says...



Thank you, Scarlett. :P
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- Paul the Apostle

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Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:28 pm
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Europa says...



Alrighty! Here's my Dragon's abilities

Javor

Mind Link Javor is able to set up a temporary psychic link between groups of people. The more people who share the link, the shorter the range of connection will be. He can't open more than one independent link at a time


Bellam

Burning Claw Bellam has the ability to superheat her front talons, turning them into white-hot weapons that have been known to melt through solid metal. Her thick hide protects her from the heat, but only for a limited time.
  








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