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Thu Jun 27, 2019 6:29 pm
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Liberty says...



Lol, it was good that you asked, though. XD
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Sun Jun 30, 2019 7:35 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX Fine with it too! PG-13 is for a targetted audience, but that doesn't mean that deeper themes can't be explored at all; it's just that they can't be too graphic, as far as I understand. So, yeah, I'd be fine with it!

Also, @hiraeth, I'm late but ready! You may now read the CP — and hopefully, it's decent. I do admit that I had loads of fun making this character :3
Also wow we have a full straight crew with lots of females and almost no males. That's... I find that hilarious XD
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Mon Jul 01, 2019 11:11 am
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@TinkerTwaggy accepted! your character's awesome!
Though by reading your backstory, i got the idea that Lee was recruited once news spread about the 'treasure hunt'? i was kinda going for the teams knowing each other for at least two years (since they first discovered their abilities) but it's alright if you want to come in as a new recruit.

Actually, if all of you think this is a good idea; maybe instead of being in the team from before, there can be some sort of selection once the king spreads the news?
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Mon Jul 01, 2019 1:09 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Okay...So the Sky Scraper has two straight women, a straight man, and a bisexual man. This should be interesting.

As far as the selection thing, I would say that it would be interesting. However, it does pose a problem in some regards. If we are all just being selected then it is unlikely that certain characters will know how to run a flying ship. I know that Maolan will not have much knowledge of them outside of what he would be asked to make while aboard.

An alternative can be that some of us have been together for a little while, but as Children of the Sky pop up rather randomly, it is easily understandable that new members could be joining up all the time.
  





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Mon Jul 01, 2019 1:34 pm
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ChildOfNowhere says...



The Prince is a guy and bi as well, for the record. His profile is almost done, I’ll get it submitted today. I just need to figure out what he looks like, lol
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Thu Jul 04, 2019 6:45 am
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hi @ChildOfNowhere @Omnom! not to nag or anything but we'll not be able to start unless at least all the characters are submitted. so even a simple character would be okay at the moment, and then you can go back and elaborate on it later when you've got time.that way, those of us who're ready can start posting :)

@everyone i'll be posting the writerfeed pad for this soon, to discuss plots and theories. :)
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Thu Jul 04, 2019 4:07 pm
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Yay! I'm so excited! :D :D (: (:
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Thu Jul 04, 2019 6:27 pm
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Aye, sorry this took so long. I had it ready for a while, but wasn't around the laptop to hit submit. Let me know if there's anything I need to change—or if there's something he should know as the king's kid.
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Fri Jul 05, 2019 5:24 am
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Apologies as well! Orion has been submitted :D
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Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:37 pm
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@ChildOfNowhere the technology isn't advanced enough for guns, actually. the pin's cool, though.
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Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:49 pm
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I had a gun that was always loaded in my character... >_> What now?
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Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:56 pm
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whoops, lib! i missed that gun detail there. it was not in the weapons section so i think my eyes decided to skip over that line :P (and this is how i skipped an entire question in my science paper. will i ever learn?)
just replace it with a bow that never runs out of arrows? or anything else you want.
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Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:58 pm
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Ooh, that'd be nice. Thanks!

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Fri Jul 05, 2019 3:50 pm
ChildOfNowhere says...



Oh, I really wanted him to have something ranged, but I don’t see him as an arrow/bolt kind of person. I’ll think of something (or he just won’t have a proper weapon until he finds something in a castle?)
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Fri Jul 05, 2019 9:33 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



What about repeating hand crossbows?
  








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