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Wed Jun 26, 2019 4:20 pm
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hiraeth says...



:) @XxXTheSwordsmanXxX yes, you can join!

@TinkerTwaggy @Omnom how're those CPs coming along?
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Wed Jun 26, 2019 4:24 pm
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Liberty says...



When are we starting the storybook? When the characters are all taken?
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Wed Jun 26, 2019 4:27 pm
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@Liberty500 when all members who've asked to join have submitted their CPs, we'll begin :)
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and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

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Wed Jun 26, 2019 4:30 pm
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Mkay.
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Wed Jun 26, 2019 5:13 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I'll have one submitted shortly.
  





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Wed Jun 26, 2019 5:42 pm
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Alright CP submitted. I hope it will be good. He might be a bit of slow burn character but I think he will be fun to play
  





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Wed Jun 26, 2019 8:12 pm
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I have gotten permission to do this with our Storybook creator and they suggested I bring this up with the group and see what you think is too far or if it is fine.

During one of the times that we are endangered, likely in one of the flying castles, Maolan is going to be injured in a way that his left arm is going to lame (paralyzed and otherwise unusable). This is going to devastate him as it hits his fear of losing his ability to do what he loves.

We have had agreed that after a depression with the character, he will receive a mechanical arm that is magically enchanted, having compartments and exchangeable parts and the like.

There are a couple of scenes that I am not sure about with the PG-13 rating and it was suggested I speak with everyone here about it. During the depression he has I thought about him contemplating suicide by jumping from the air ship before someone stops him. I also had in mind a "removing of the old arm to place the new arm" scene which might be a bit darker than the rest of the storybook.

Any thoughts on too far?
  





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Wed Jun 26, 2019 8:15 pm
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Omnom says...



@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX I'm personally fine with all of that!

@hiraeth unfortunately I don't think I'll have my character until July 2 probably. I'll see if I can get free time to work on it in a bit, but my attention is being placed elsewhere at the moment.
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Wed Jun 26, 2019 8:17 pm
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@Omnom that's completely fine!
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and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

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Wed Jun 26, 2019 8:52 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Another question to ask it how long have our respective parties been "sailing" together? I'm not sure about other characters, but for Maolan the more familiar he is with someone the more open he is. Though he will still be a little awkward with the fact that as of right now he is the only male on the Sky Scraper. XD
  





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Thu Jun 27, 2019 12:54 am
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AlyTheBookworm says...



@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX
I think that would be an interesting storyline for Maolan- so I'd be fine with that too.
  





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Thu Jun 27, 2019 1:34 am
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i was thinking about them being in the group for at least two years....
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and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

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Thu Jun 27, 2019 2:36 pm
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@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX - That sounds perfectly fine to me!!
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Thu Jun 27, 2019 5:17 pm
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ChildOfNowhere says...



Oh, good thing this was brought up, because I totally forgot about the rating and I tend to write both some relatively dark and some mental-health-related stuff myself (but don’t worry, I won’t go too far). Goes without saying, I’m also fine with reading it.
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Thu Jun 27, 2019 5:44 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



That's me. Asking the important and uncomfortable questions. Lol
  








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