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Wed Jun 05, 2019 12:47 am
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Magestorrow says...



Okay! Thanks. <3 I feel like King Mickey would have started looking more into the darkness if it had shown up before five years, but we'll see what you find out. :)
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 12:53 am
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HazelGrace16 says...



Would it be easier to just have her family be from Traverse Town as one of the founders and take out the part about Radiant Garden? Make Traverse Town a travel stop essentially before it becomes the refugee spot for broken worlds?
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 12:56 am
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That sounds good to me!
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 1:04 am
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Okay I made the changes
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 1:09 am
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Magestorrow says...



Sweet! Rhea's all set now. <3
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 1:11 am
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I made some changes to Rory's profile.
  





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Wed Jun 05, 2019 1:14 am
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Rory looks good to me! I love the connection of the library - while it's not a major thing for Levi, it does tie in to what I think Lira is interested in. I'm pretty sure her mom is going to be a librarian on Destiny Islands, so the two of them can bond over a love of books.
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 4:43 am
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LordZeus says...



Thanks @Magestorrow! I'm eager to get started. Is there a page or something I could look at to better understand the lore or general world of KH? You know, like history, places, different groups that live in it etc.

P.S. Remember me @HazelGrace16? I can't believe I'll be collaborating with you again on my first Sb after coming back online! Sorry about leaving without any warning btw
  





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Its okay @LordZeus it's good to have you back! I've been away for awhile myself and it'll be nice to work together again. If you have major questions I get most of my info from the kingdom hearts wiki. I also highly suggest some youtube videos to give you a basic rundown of the timeline and world of kingdom hearts. That always helps me but let me know if that helps. I love to do research!

Also, I included some concept art that inspired the character to the bottom of Rhea's CP to give her a little more life if anyone wants to check that out! @Magestorrow
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I love that art! Adding that in was a cool touch. <3 I actually have a sketch of Lira's current design, and what I plan on her looking like later on, but I need to take a picture before I can add it to her CP.

In the meantime, I succumbed to my impulsiveness and posted the flashback with Levi. It should give everyone more of an idea what Levi was like, and also get you all more pumped for the storybook.

We're still waiting on a few more CPs, but I'll work on my first official post once all of them are in! <3
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 7:20 pm
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I will work on implementing Levi into Rokza profile, but I'm thinking that Levi was a friend of Rokza's early on and inspired him to leave
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 7:24 pm
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Okay! That sounds good to me. Levi traveled to other worlds and made friends between when he was seven and ten years old, so that would have been five-eight years before the start of the storybook.
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 8:32 pm
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@Magestorrow his CP is updated! Levi was his only friend in the army, and Rokza thinks Levi was killed, which is why he left. I really like this better than what I had
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 10:34 pm
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CP is up! Please tell me if there is anything you'd like me to change @Magestorrow. Head's up, it's gonna be a long read. Sorry in advance!
  





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Wed Jun 05, 2019 10:42 pm
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Magestorrow says...



Aron looks great! I'm not sure keyblades have physical counterparts, but the Soul Semblance already looks pretty special - I'm sure that the pendant would work perfectly with the lore. :)
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