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Wed May 29, 2019 2:49 am
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HazelGrace16 says...



Posted! Please feel free to comment if there was anything you guys didn't like. I'm also sorry if it seems rushed because I just really wanted to get back into the swing of things. Hopefully, this is a new jumpstart!
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
  





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Thu May 30, 2019 12:37 am
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I think the best way to get things going is to open posting upnto everyone again, so we're not just waiting on two people for a long while, and we can move foreward if we hit any snags without much trouble. What do you guys think?
  





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Thu May 30, 2019 3:29 am
AlyTheBookworm says...



I think that's a good idea. :)
  





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Thu May 30, 2019 11:09 pm
Europa says...



Alrighty. I'll check in with Chaser about his post, and if needed I'll write up a short post. @Noobwriter88 how do you feel about posting after one of us?
  





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Sat Jun 01, 2019 12:39 am
Noobwriter88 says...



sure! I can do that!
  





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Sat Jun 01, 2019 5:32 am
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Chaser says...



I'm good and writing a post introducing the first villains. Hope to have it soon.
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Sat Jun 01, 2019 7:38 pm
Europa says...



Alright great! Then I'll post after Noob.
  





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Sun Jun 02, 2019 10:02 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



Woot here we go!
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Mon Jun 03, 2019 12:36 am
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And here I was worried we wouldn't get the ball rolling again. Just goes to show what a great cast we have!
  





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Wed Jun 05, 2019 8:47 am
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Chaser says...



I posted for Yohan; I tried to portray people correctly. But I also introduced two new characters, Onyx's lackeys!

Hannah can create fields of intense gravity through contact. Her secondary Grim ability also allows her to negate it and create zero gravity zones.

Vittorio can fire his tears as frozen bullets of mayhem. His secondary Grim ability is Gigantic Weeping, a sound that reminds people of their sorrows until they freeze from the inside out.

Their second abilities don't have to be unlocked or used at the moment, but those are the ideas I have to make an exciting battle. Have fun!
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 1:20 pm
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Europa says...



Awesome post, @Chaser!

Jack can't actually talk to Betsy, although I could see her pretending to once in a while.

@Noobwriter88, looks like you're up!
  





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Mon Jun 10, 2019 2:32 am
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Europa says...



I'm going to be away for the next five days at camp. If noob posts while I'm away, feel free to skip over me and I'll post next
  





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Mon Jun 10, 2019 12:09 pm
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hiraeth says...



have fun :)
I was eleven years old
and I'd lost my mother,
and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

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Mon Jun 10, 2019 10:18 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



How’s it going @Noobwriter88 ??? I’m really excited to see your first post!
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Fri Jun 14, 2019 6:07 pm
Europa says...



Hey guys! Back from herding campers and glad to see you!

Noob hit a snag, and won't be able to start writing until Monday, so I'll be taking his posting slot and hopefully he'll be able to post after.
  








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