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Sun Jan 27, 2019 5:18 pm
manilla says...



So spots go here, apparently, because I'm just figuring out how this works lol

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Character template (get rid of the bracket stuff):
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[b]Name:[/b] [perhaps try something you would find in a sci-fi book?]
[b]Age:[/b] [100-200 years old, which is about the peak of Kynde life.]
[b]Gender:[/b] [Kynde don't necessarily have gender, but they can have more feminine or masculine leanings, which you can say here.]
[b]Skill:[/b] [strategist, combat, logician, creative thinker, etc]
[b]Skill #2:[/b] [basically, what do they contribute to the mission?]
[b]Personality:[/b] [Try to be detailed on this!]
[b]Other:[/b] [the miscellaneous category. Could be quirks, some more aptitudes, etc.]
Last edited by manilla on Tue Jan 29, 2019 3:25 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Sun Jan 27, 2019 10:20 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



Umm okay, so I just make a character?
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Sun Jan 27, 2019 10:36 pm
manilla says...



Yeah, just do that...I made a template above!
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Sun Jan 27, 2019 10:50 pm
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Welcome to Jynn! Pt. 1


Jynn is a cold planet orbiting at the outer edge of its star's habitable zone, but it is kept relatively warm by its atmosphere, which is mostly composed of CO2.

This is a damp, boggy world, prone to excessive rain and seasonal flooding. Jynn is known for its dense forests of electroluminescent trees in its swamp forests.

A relatively flat surface prevents water from pooling into large oceans and instead keeps the water table high. There are a number of small seas however, which are fed by wide, shallow rivers - a product of the planet's active weather system. Kynde are capable of drinking saline water and freshwater.

Away from the protected nature reserves are massive cities, centers of trade. Food production is mostly automated and now, artificial. Kynde try to be as conserving as possible, but that doesn't give them an excuse to live, well, fabulously. Color-changing, moving, and interactive wearable fashion based on your current mood is all the rage. Sleek suits are also a trend for day-to-day wear.

Since this planet is like the moon, its orbit around the sun and around its axis are the same, so one part of the planet is extremely cold (the cities) and one part is extremely warm. Kynde have adapted to this regardless of what their reptilian appearance says.

Source/Inspiration: http://www.scifiideas.com/planet-generator/
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Sun Jan 27, 2019 10:51 pm
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A resource for what happened on Earth before the Kydne arrived, which should be about ~6,030 CE, is at http://www.futuretimeline.net
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Mon Jan 28, 2019 2:05 am
manilla says...



Hey, @Fantascifi66! I approved your character, you can finish it anytime :)
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Mon Jan 28, 2019 6:23 am
Fantascifi66 says...



Thank you!
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Tue Jan 29, 2019 3:24 am
manilla says...



I added a backstory to the personality profile that would be nice to have
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Tue Jan 29, 2019 2:21 pm
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Ok :)
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 4:51 pm
manilla says...



Inside the Kynde spaceship that they take to Earth (1)
The ship itself is pretty small, but this is part of the living chambers provided by the Kynde government
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 7:08 pm
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Oooo, cool!
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 7:10 pm
manilla says...



I'm going to start off with a post for the storybook so it can begin moving along :D
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 7:16 pm
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Good idea!
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