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Sun Feb 24, 2019 6:45 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



@AstralHunter Right? I'm enjoying these profiles, as well! Plus, we've got two nymphs and two humans, which I like, for balance's sake.
Also, as a stuttering person myself, I'm loving the precision you've used for Lylander's portrayal. Can't wait to see his cuteness in action!

Welp, back to the scheming grounds! I'm already done planning out my character relationships and goals, but now it's time to add Lylander to those! Should be fun :3

Hmm... Well, Twaggy be Twaggy, so I planned to start my post with an trial mission so that Rumishu could apply for joining the Woodwatch's Spider Corps.
Since we must start by moving into the apartment, I can totally do that after moving in!
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Mon Feb 25, 2019 9:53 pm
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Hehehehehehehe... I am double posting for two reasons: first... Well, my DT posts are long enough as they are, so elongating it with an edit would make it unnecessary overwhelming. Second? I did find a way to add Lylander to my character-related plans, and upgrades lil' shards of what I want with Rumishu at the same time. Can't wait to apply all that XD
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Mon Feb 25, 2019 10:14 pm
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Europa says...



I absolutely love the look of this group!we've got so many different personalities to bounce off of and that makes the possiblities for growth pretty much endless!

@AstralHunter I think it would be cool to start on a mission early on, since that's when the whole group on both watches would be able to interact, but I also think it would be useful to have a bit of slice of life tomfoolery before getting into the big stuff.
  





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Wed Mar 20, 2019 9:43 pm
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The Challenge: Since the SB hasn't started yet, creating your character profiles is currently the main priority! As far as I'm aware, most of you have started yet, which is quite commendable! I haven't even finished updating the list of golems yet, but I swear, everytime I say I'll get around to it, the professors and doctors decide to throw more work my way. At least you have an idea of which golems you want at the start, which is good. If you want me to look over your CP before you submit it, that's fine by me, but since there's no history section, I'm pretty sure you can write whatever you like for much of it.

Completion Time: This won't take very long, so just do it whenever you have the time! I, err, will be following that route myself; I therefore can't really enforce anything else.

Credits Awarded: It's a really simple character profile, so I think two credits is reasonable! For my two nymphs, you know you can ask me questions at any time and I'll get back to you as quickly as possible.


PS: The storybook is still open, so if anybody wants to join, you're more than welcome to!

All of us completed this challenge in a timely manner, which is excellent! If the next one could go just as successfully, that'd be great! Tort is already busy with a post, and since I'm free until April, I can actually write now.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Spring has returned! Winter is over, and BrumalHunter is no more!
  





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Wed Mar 20, 2019 10:01 pm
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The new challenge is up! Rumishu will retrieve the keys for all the apartments from the landlady, since she'll be arriving first. Thereafter, our characters will need to pick an apartment - there are four on the ground floor and two on the second, with three rooms on each side of the complex - and collect the appropriate key from Rumi. Tort will post first, after which it's Europa, me, and finally Chaser. I'm excited to have this storybook underway! :D
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
- Paul the Apostle

Spring has returned! Winter is over, and BrumalHunter is no more!
  





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Thu Mar 21, 2019 8:16 am
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TinkerTwaggy says...



Yay! Challenge's official, thank you for that. I've indeed started writing already, so I'll keep on doing that.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Sat Mar 23, 2019 3:24 am
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ScarlettFire says...



*sneaks in* May I join?
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Sat Mar 23, 2019 6:12 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



Haaaai♪

Obviously Astral's decision prevails, but since it's totally free to join as of yet (and also we're only four, so it's not like we have too many members or anything), allow me to welcome you already!
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Sat Mar 23, 2019 8:42 pm
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@ScarlettFire, you're more than welcome to! The storybook is open to anyone, so if you're interested in joining, we'd be more than happy to have you on board! Feel free to ask me any questions you have.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
- Paul the Apostle

Spring has returned! Winter is over, and BrumalHunter is no more!
  





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Sun Mar 24, 2019 12:28 am
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Europa says...



@SarletteFire welcome aboard!
  





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Sun Mar 24, 2019 12:44 am
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Haha, thanks! I’ve been asking questions in the discord. Hopefully my profile will be up in a few days!
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Sun Mar 24, 2019 10:25 pm
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Yes, I did notice! Good luck with said profile, m'dear, though you should be just fine makin' it.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Wed Apr 24, 2019 11:21 pm
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Aaand posted! Sorry for taking my time with this. Exams, and such.

Enjoy!
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Thu Apr 25, 2019 2:10 am
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ScarlettFire says...



YAY FINALLY *runs off to read*
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Thu Apr 25, 2019 8:43 pm
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That was a wonderful opening post, @TinkerTwaggy! It set the tone quite nicely, I think. And your characterisation was excellent! It already feels like all three women have distinctive voices. The grammar and dialogue format was a bit oof at times, but that kind of thing only warrants an initial remark (and without much elaboration). I don't have much further crticism, really, so well done! I especially liked Jani's description — I could perfectly envision her outfit.

@Europa, that means you're up! If you or anybody else have feedback or questions for Tort, feel free to use the DT, server, or any other means of communication that you'd like!

I'm pumped to see this finally take off! :D
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
- Paul the Apostle

Spring has returned! Winter is over, and BrumalHunter is no more!
  








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