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Thu Apr 25, 2019 9:21 pm
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Alright! I should be able to start on my post next week
  





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Sat May 04, 2019 2:25 pm
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@AstralHunter though I've already sorta replied to this in the DT:

Thank you, m'dear! Yeah so the issues have been fixed, since I hadn't copied/pasted the fully corrected version, which is very embarrassing, but eh, it's me we're talking about XD
That being said, getting the three gals to have their own voices was especially challenging, so I'm glad I managed that! Especially for Rumi — it's a lot more natural for me than for most people to write a character that's non-native in their speech patterns, I'd assume, but it was loads of fun trying to properly limit it!
And yay for Jani's outfit! I wasn't sure if the colors were fine or not, so that's good.
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Sun Jun 02, 2019 7:49 pm
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@Europa has confirmed that she'll be writing next, so stay tuned! :D

@Chaser, are you still with us, friend? It's been a while since this storybook was launched, but you'll get to write for your standoffish Nymph soon enough!
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Mon Jun 03, 2019 4:54 am
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Mon Jun 03, 2019 8:56 am
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That's fantastic news! @Europa will likely be communicating with you soon, since she wants to focus on character interaction in her post. I'll be writing after her, but if you're eager to jump ahead, I'd have no objections to it!
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Mon Jun 10, 2019 2:35 am
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Hey guys! I'm afraid I'll have to push back my post, because I'll be gone for a week at camp, but I'll get right back to work on it when I return!
  





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Fri Jun 14, 2019 12:53 am
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Omnom says...



Hey there! Your challenge has expired!

AstralHunter wrote:

The Challenge: We've known for a while what the posting order is, but let's make it official! Our characters have to move into their apartments, with Rumi, Dallie, Lyle, and Caduciel respectively arriving at the complex. Each apartment has its own bedroom, bathroom (Skyreach has an impressive sanitation and water system), study, small kitchen, and small living area. Nothing will stop your character from making their place comfortable, but if the others have already moved in, they should say hi! Rumi will collect the keys from the landlady, but everyone else will have to go see her to enter their apartments. Speaking of those, there are four on the ground floor and two on the second - it's first come first serve!

Completion Time: Hopefully only a few weeks, since Tort has already started with his post, but a month ought to suffice. I'm free for the next week and a half, so I can write a post once it's my turn!

Credits Awarded: Three credits are available: one for your character moving in, one for interacting with the complex and/or the other tenants, and then one more for applying changes to the unit to suit your character's preferences and needs.


PS: The storybook is still open, so if anybody wants to join, you're more than welcome to!



That impressive sanitation and water system has piqued my interest haha. I can't wait to see your next challenge and happy SBing!
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Fri Jun 21, 2019 12:24 am
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Made my post. The groups going out to shop can be decided however.
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Mon Jul 01, 2019 1:22 am
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My post has now also been completed, which concludes the first round of submissions! Well done, everyone! The first major milestone has been conquered! I am so proud of and grateful for all of your contributions.

I would love to comment on each of your posts, but since it's a bit late, I... think I shall do that tomorrow instead. XD
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Thu Aug 22, 2019 12:38 pm
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Just to update everyone, I've asked @Europa in the server whether she minds writing the next post, and she doesn't! If anybody wants to discuss stuff, I'll be around! (Both here and in the server, naturally.) I'm also happy to help out with Lyle where needed. ^_^
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Spring has returned! Winter is over, and BrumalHunter is no more!
  








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