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Mon Jan 21, 2019 9:23 pm
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zaminami says...



Oh, and I know that her backstory would resemble something like lust, but what I wanted to exploit is how she abandoned her comrades and never went back for them. Sorry!
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Mon Jan 21, 2019 9:31 pm
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Is Gluttony still free? If so, I'd like to join.
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Mon Jan 21, 2019 9:35 pm
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Gluttony is still free, @Chaser! I'll go put you down for that role.

With that, I think we have a full cast! I'm going to make the member of royalty an NPC and start working on my first post soon - I just have to iron out a few details about our royal character. In the meantime, please work on your character profiles! I'm excited to see what you come up with.

And @zaminami, I absolutely love Ari! I admit I don't know too much about Gowther's backstory, so it'll be interesting seeing how you tackle Ari's past in this.

Also, it looks like we might have our first minor villain to add to the storybook~

There were also some nasty rumors going around that Bagrrison had turned himself into a doll and escaped prison, accompanied with some whispers that he could control dolls. But, you know, that’s not possible, right?
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Mon Jan 21, 2019 9:37 pm
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Is it possible to edit your character profile afterwards?
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Mon Jan 21, 2019 9:38 pm
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@Magestorrow eheheheh ;) do you want me to make a profile for him?
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Mon Jan 21, 2019 9:39 pm
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@Fantascifi66, it is! Even once a profile is accepted, you can still go in and change it. I can as well, since I'm the one who owns the storybooks. :)

@zaminami, I think we'll be good for now with just the protagonists, but something tells me I'll be hitting you up on your offer later~
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Mon Jan 21, 2019 9:47 pm
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Kanome says...



@Magestorrow So I don't understand the Role and Race in the character template. Is there a list or something I can look up? And I am working on the character. I already drew a sketch of my character :D
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Mon Jan 21, 2019 9:52 pm
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@Kanome, your role is what you claimed! For example, my character's role is the Dragon's Sin of Wrath, and yours would be the Lion's Sin of Pride! Your character's past involves something they did that matches their sin, like, in my gal's case, destroying an entire town in a fit of rage.

The anime this is based on has a very wide range of mythological races in it, so the race section is really up for you to decide. The ones I know of are demon, doll, human (with or without magic), goddess, fairy, and giant, but I'm sure there's countless more. I will say that we already have a demon, goddess and doll, but I'm sure we could have multiple ones if that's what interests you most.

If you want more information on any of the races, just let me know - I'll do my best to provide it. :)

Also, I can't wait to see your sketch!
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Tue Jan 22, 2019 4:29 am
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Chaser says...



I submitted my hedgehog Jesus his name is Ubu
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Tue Jan 22, 2019 5:18 am
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Also, for some reason it says that my discord invite is invalid.
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Wed Jan 23, 2019 12:05 am
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Weird! It could be because it's an old one, so I'll try posting one in here instead. Does this work?

Also, @Chaser, Ubu looks wonderful! Your last comment in the DT confused me to no end, right up until I read your CP - now it all makes sense. :P

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Just going to put that here to immortalize it in the DT as well as the SB~
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Wed Jan 23, 2019 12:55 am
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It works, thank you kindly. Glad you like Ubu.
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Wed Jan 23, 2019 1:48 pm
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kat13254 says...



Aaaaand Ana is submitted! @Magestorrow
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Wed Jan 23, 2019 8:23 pm
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Ana looks great, @kat13254! It'll be fun seeing how conflicted she is about Hendrickson as the story progresses. <3

@Fantascifi66, I saw your progress on Solstar so far! Her profile is looking pretty good~ I just have one request - could you use the character template I provided on the first page of the DT? It has all of the information that I'm looking for on it, and all you would have to do is copy and paste it into the character profile.

If you don't mind me asking, what race is Solstar? I'm curious to see what the set up of the group will be. Right now, I think it's a demon, a beast man, a doll, a goddess and someone mirroring Ban's story, if @RaidenCheese goes through with his character plans that I chatted with him about outside of the storybook's DT.
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Thu Jan 24, 2019 2:18 pm
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You know i will, @Magestorrow
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