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I'd say go for it! ^^ And you can always talk to people specifically about how you portrayed their character if you have questions.

If no one plans on going I could go next? But if someone else wants to go next they can! But I could be able to come up with something!

@SpiritedWolfe Totally!

@AmberSunset Go for it!


Extra clarification on passenger compartments:
This is my bad, since I wasn't really specific enough, but the compartments are similar in size to a subway carriage or a bus, meaning they each have about 30-ish seats. That's how all the characters can be in the same compartment. I called them compartments because they're so secure and closed-off from the rest of the Craft. I've asked Lake to alter her post slightly so this stays consistent, to no real fault of her own.

@LakeOfCancer Regardless of this, what a nice post, Lake! It really highlighted the seriousness of the situation (and like I said to you, I wouldn't be surprised if Tottan was the one to find Astrid XD )

I finally got around to writing up how Runi would view the other characters! Please let me know what you think of what I put - I'm really curious, and I'd love to build off of your own thoughts to make them even better.

Alright I posted on the story book! Sorry but my response isn't nearly as good as the first two.... but I swear I'll get better as we go along!

@AmberSunset

AmberSunset wrote:Anya has always been intrigued by humans, but she was just now learning that they may not be as smart as she once thought. A smart human would listen to an announcement. Right?

hAHAHA I'm dead :'D
And yay Anya is actually going to look for Tephra! Great post, Amber (it's not bad at all, silly)! Thanks for setting up a situation that invites the other characters to also leave.

@Saen Thanks for posting, as well, Sae! I love the way you handled Runi's backstory in your post. I can already tell she's going to be an interesting character :3


Is anyone available to go next? (*tags people*: @niteowl @Tortwag ... @soundofmind?)

I LOVE how Anya has become... “The Horned Lady” too much love

I might be able to post tonight or tomorrow, though I have no objections if anyone wants to go first. My vague outline is that Zenia will probably be lost in a daydream when the announcement happens, have to ascertain that this is really happening and not just a bad vision, and then I think she will be compelled to leave and try to find the others who have left because of some prediction that that's the best route forward. But I have to think about what happens at that point.

I just don't know what to write xD I would love to have someone to collaborate with back in the compartment but no one else has said anything.

I want to post lol.... I feel like Tottan - since no one's really taken charge yet - will probably step up and just tell people hey, let's have you all stay in the compartment, I'm a medic, I'm gonna go see if anyone needs help

@niteowl That would be awesome if you could c:

@soundofmind Sounds good!

And hMM... I might add a temporary section at the top of the WriterFeed Pad so we know who is staying in the compartment and who is leaving. Edit/add where your character will be. At this point it's okay if the group splits up, because they will most likely all meet up again to fight/strategise in Stage 2 when the serpent monster thing appears.

Okay, so I posted! It's rather long, whoops. Anyway, I get those of us who are staying to explore the compartment and find the first odd thing. I included other characters a lot, so please let me know if I didn't get them right and I can edit @soundofmind @SpiritedWolfe @Tortwag @Synnoev.

"Hello Timewalker Zenia Xedron Zee and Galtanii Glayosei Giarkl Glay. I am Human Simon. You may call me Simon."

QUOTE OF MY LIFE xDD

That was a really fun, interesting post, @niteowl. I'd love if we made our first puzzle out of this just because puzzles are great xD But it also gives plenty of times for the others to properly explore ~

@niteowl Oooooooo *mystery intensifies*
And psh long no that's a good length. Great post, nite!

~ double posts ~

Everyone is doing awesomely with this storybook! I'm seriously so hyped

So y'all are informed, LakeOfCancer has edited her post so that Astrid left the compartment before the Taxzi Craft entered the wormhole, meaning that she is in a public lounge area of sorts (a perfect location for those characters who are leaving the compartment to find her).

Those who haven't yet posted in the storybook are @SpiritedWolfe, @soundofmind, and @Tortwag (and Synnoev but she's away). Are any of you able to post sometime soon?