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The Pianist's Daughter [DT]



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Tue Jul 03, 2018 10:38 pm
Clairia says...



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Welcome to The Pianist's Daughter Detailed Discussion! I suppose we can call it TPDDD for short. :wink:

This page is designed for us to talk about details surrounding The Pianist's Daughter! The discussion starts below.

The storybook is now closed. Unfortunately no more spots are left. Thanks to all who decided to participate!


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Last edited by Clairia on Tue Jul 03, 2018 11:38 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Tue Jul 03, 2018 11:03 pm
kat13254 says...



I edited Ari's age to make it more in line with everyone else's!
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Tue Jul 03, 2018 11:05 pm
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@kat13254 Awesome! Thanks for that <3
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Tue Jul 03, 2018 11:06 pm
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@Saruka @kat13254 @Danni88 If you all wouldn't mind including faceclaims on your application pages, I would really appreciate it! It helps me get a better understanding on your characters besides the physical description. Thank you!
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Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  





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Wed Jul 04, 2018 4:08 am
Carina says...



hiiiiii all~

I'll be playing a maid xD but I look forward to be SB'ing with you in the future! :D


also psssst @arden don't forget to link the DT in the main SB; I believe it's one of the options you use to edit the header and stuff so then a DT button will appear automatically
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Wed Jul 04, 2018 4:14 am
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Hi!! I'm really excited to have you join <3

@Carina wait actually that's crazy talk lemme check that out real quick

{edit} holy smokes i did it
thank you!
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Sun Jul 15, 2018 4:10 pm
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Sorry to double post, everyone, but I think we all really need to have a meeting on the feedpad sometime soon! { @Saruka @Carina @godhatesshane @kat13254 @Danni88 } It's time to start developing the plot.
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Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
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Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
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Sun Jul 15, 2018 4:32 pm
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I think we should too, it just depends on what's convenient for everyone else.
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Sun Jul 15, 2018 7:27 pm
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Agreed!

Buuuut I know it's always hard to coordinate groups to get on a pad at the same time, so maybe we could first start discussing general plot bunnies here, then get on a pad if we need to?
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Wed Jul 25, 2018 6:49 pm
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That's a good idea!
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Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
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Thu Jul 26, 2018 2:09 am
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yayayayay

so, since it sounds like you have something in mind, how do you think we should start? :o Or what will be the main conflict here (Cecilia?) that'll tie everyone together?
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Thu Jul 26, 2018 3:09 am
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Yeah! Cecilia sent letters to the four kids the day before she disappeared that told them they could only trust each other and that the secrets to solving her mystery would be in what she loved most (music.)
"If you have
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Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  





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Thu Jul 26, 2018 4:02 am
Carina says...



mYstEriOuS

Do we write these letters ourselves? Or is this something you give us?
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Thu Jul 26, 2018 4:10 am
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I'm currently writing them, and I planned to have them all on the WFP by last week, but I've been running low on time lately, so they should be on there by Friday. Hopefully. The trouble is that I'll be at the beach for a week (starting Friday) and by the time I'm back it'll pretty much be time for me to go back to school :(
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  





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Sat Aug 04, 2018 9:01 pm
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Here's the letter, guys! In the first round we'll all be following the instructions.

Dear {Insert character here},
I write to you hurriedly and desperately. You barely know me, or at least, I barely remember now if you do or not- it doesn't matter.
I'm in danger. Peril that I cannot express now. I don't have time. None of us do. It's running out quickly.
The following instructions are for your eyes only.
1. Upon recieving and reading this letter, meet up with the three others that I will list later at the supermarket nearest to my house immediately. You know the one.
2. Behind the supermarket is a garage. It's where the trucks drop off produce. Go into that garage.
3. Wait ten minutes. A truck should arrive. Approach the driver and ask for a box with a blue top. He'll give it to you.
Once you have the box, go to my house and knock on my door. My father will answer. Give him the box. He'll go in and open it. Go back to your houses afterwards. More instructions will follow at a later time.
The ONLY ONES you are to trust with this information are {The three other protagonists other than yourself}
Do not waste time. Go now, and go quickly.
Cecilia
"If you have
a painting in you, paint.
Just create it.
Banish doubt and fear
and step out of your own way.
Write if you're a writer.
Do what you were born to do.
--Toni Sorenson

  








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