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Fri Jul 13, 2018 2:37 am
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TheSilverFox says...



omg barfles, yesssss. ;-;
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Sun Jul 15, 2018 7:32 pm
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Carina says...



okay okay, post is about halfway finished. It took me a while to figure out what kind of chaos is going to happen, but now I got this, and it'll be a great start to the SB, yes totally.

Silver, Marcy's going to go to the bar and happens to sit next to Claire. I'll write out their interactions, but I'm 'fraid of going out of character, so I'll PM you what I have to see what you think! Or maybe it'll be easier if we go on a pad and roleplay the part a bit? I'll let ya decide.
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Sun Jul 15, 2018 8:14 pm
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TheSilverFox says...



On a scale of one to ten, how much chaos are we talking about here. :P

Since I haven't formed Claire's character too well, and I'm also worried about being unavailable, I'm totally fine if you want to PM the details to me. I'm sure you've/you'll do a wonderful job, but I can definitely be there if you have any questions or concerns. And yesss let's get this SB started!
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Sun Jul 15, 2018 8:22 pm
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Carina says...



Let's just say it involves a soon-to-be drunk Claire, Baquirans fighting, someone getting punched, and fire sprinklers going off -- all because Marcy's hair was ruined. :P

But no worries! I'll be sure to PM you if I'm unsure of anything, then.
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Mon Jul 23, 2018 12:45 am
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Carina says...



POSTED. Sorry it took so long! life has been very busy ;_;

buuuut it's done, and it was pretty fun to write, actually. LOL enjoy this chaos, everyone


Also, Silver -- it might be easier if you did backwards writing with this one? I gave just enough detail to say the gist of what happened to Claire, but so much stuff happened that it's kinda muddy. also because omg I would LOVE to know all the details that will happen for her to be called Barfles.


OH YEAH and let me know if I was out of character with Claire and/or Lottie so I can make changes!
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Mon Jul 23, 2018 1:16 pm
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Lumi says...



@Carina CARINA CARINA OMG

xDDD

I think Fox or Scar will go next? Imma need Roan or his Lieutenant (let's call him/her Harper for now) and accuse her of violating terms of service lol
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Mon Jul 23, 2018 2:49 pm
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Carina says...



I WASN'T KIDDING WHEN I SAID I'D UNLEASH FULL CHAOS LOL

oh man oh man oh man, Marcy is probably going to try to pinpoint this all on Lottie because of the dirty cup lololol

or maybe the Baquirans because I talked to Scar and one of them has this power thing that can trigger switches aka the fire sprinklers

or Claire
just becuz

I'D LAUGH SO HARD IF EVERYONE GOES TO DORIAN JAIL
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Tue Jul 24, 2018 3:33 am
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ScarlettFire says...



Hahaha, omgyes. THE CHAOS IS AMAZING I LOVE IT!
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Sat Jul 28, 2018 9:10 pm
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TheSilverFox says...



Aaaagh I totally forgot to mention that I read and loved your post, @Carina! It was hilarious, fast-paced, choatic, and gives me so much material to work with for Claire's/Barfles' introduction!

mwahahahaha
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Tue Sep 18, 2018 8:09 am
Rydia says...



Hi everyone, I have discussed with Lumi what he would like to happen with his storybooks and he has agreed that they should remain open for anyone who wishes to continue writing in them.

I realise some of you may not know this yet so it may come as a shock to you to learn that Lumi has been banned from the site.

Gossip about this is not encouraged and we would like you to respect that but if you do have any questions or concerns about this then please let me know and I'll answer your questions where I can.

Thank you for your time and happy storybooking!
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Wed Sep 19, 2018 1:12 am
TheSilverFox says...



For personal reasons, I will no longer be participating in this or any other Storybook that was run by Lumi, unless everyone still around would like me to write something. Otherwise, you can treat my characters like NPCs.
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Rydia says...



Hi All,

As there has been no activity in this storybook for three months, it's being moved to the archives. This doesn't have to mean it's dead though!

If you want to continue writing then please just let a storybook mod know and we'll move it back for you right away!
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