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Tue Apr 23, 2019 1:46 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



Huh. How unexpected.

Well, I don't suppose the commitment's an issue since we're allowed to be slow, so I guess the world in itself doesn't fit your style? ← Just asking out of curiosity, as I am a generally curious pup.

That being said, babai, m'dear! Take care, now.
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Mm, that works!
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Tue Apr 23, 2019 4:28 pm
Jaybird says...



Yeah, it's definitely more of the world itself and not the commitment part. I think this storybook is the type of story that's a blast for me to read, but not half as enjoyable to write.
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Tue Apr 23, 2019 5:10 pm
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AstralHunter says...



Thanks for your input with the creation, @Magestorrow! Hmm, if you're interested, I could write for Doomwing in addition to Direlight, and then you could make suggestions as you please! (Probably in our DM on Discord, but here would be fine too.) And if you ever change your mind, then you'd be more than welcome to write for Doomwing after all! Whatever your decision, thanks for joining in the first place! Oh, and if you could give us all feedback on our posts, I think that'd be rather helpful.
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Tue Apr 23, 2019 8:04 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



@Magestorrow Interesting! Too much foreshadowed action? Or drama? Or both?
But yeah, Astral's comment reminds me: so, is Doomwing staying at all just in case, or would you prefer to ERASE HER FROM EXISTENCE or such?
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"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Tue Apr 23, 2019 8:08 pm
Jaybird says...



I'm not really sure! I can't quite articulate how I feel, but I have zero motivation for writing this right now.

ERASE HIM FROM EXISTENCE sounds like a good plan, so @AstralHunter doesn't have to write for a character he never intended to write for. :) I can always figure out some other way to rejoin the storybook if I decide I want to write for it again.
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Wed Apr 24, 2019 6:19 am
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TinkerTwaggy says...



'Kay! Welp, this sort of answers that.

Oh, you sure? 'Cause if this is temporary, it'll be a lot easier to take back Doomwing if she stays, but eh, you get the final call on this one.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Thu Apr 25, 2019 6:34 pm
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AstralHunter says...



Aaaaactually, I find it amusing that you asked Mage at all whether she wants Doomwing to be erased, because that's not an option. Even if I end up not writing for her, the cast can't afford to have any characters scrapped. XD
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Thu Apr 25, 2019 7:00 pm
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Jaybird says...



Oh. :P Well, I guess you're keeping her, then! :)
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Thu Apr 25, 2019 7:10 pm
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AstralHunter says...



Indeed! Besides, there's so much the rest of us can do with a potential "NPC" character! ;P
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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