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Tue Jul 31, 2018 8:25 pm
Elfboy says...



It's up! @AliceinBluue, if I got Nova wrong(and I probably did) or if you can't find a way to get her down safley, I'll rewrite it.
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Tue Jul 31, 2018 9:12 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



Yay, your post is up!

*a few minutes later*

Huh. I need to stop expecting people's posts to be super duper long, it's not even needed to make 'em fun. shakes head at self
That being said, yay, that was cool! A neat introduction to Lux's mentioned persona and habits. A shame Nova had to be the first shown victim of his wonderful humor, though XD
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Tue Jul 31, 2018 9:43 pm
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@Tortwag sorry it's so short, I'm trying to cut down a bit on the amount of words describing crashing scenes.
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Tue Jul 31, 2018 9:49 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



@EthanHoover yeah, no, my earlier comment wasn't a disguised accusation or regret, m'dear, I legitimately think I should stop expecting SB posts to be long. It's been proven time and time again that the quality of a post isn't necessarily linked to it anyway, and hey, you've got some pretty fun content, so far.

*chuckle* I'm looking forward to all of us meeting at last, really. Lots of collab we'll have to do to make that work!
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Tue Jul 31, 2018 10:58 pm
Europa says...



@EthanHoover awesome post!

So, who's got the next one? If we want to keep with the theme of partners posting together, it would be @AliceinBluue, but I think enough people have posted that I could probably do another one for Ivy if need be, or someone else can go. @citrus4nite, I understand you have something in the works? Also, @Oswin1800 and @corvidconvalescence you still with us? You guys have been awfully quiet for a while.
  





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Wed Aug 01, 2018 1:42 am
Elfboy says...



I just noticed that YWS has destroyed my formatting again, Is there any way around that?
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Wed Aug 01, 2018 12:33 pm
TinkerTwaggy says...



@EthanHoover why yes, m'dear! That would be the edit button. (tiny white square, black pen over it, generally at the end of a post.)
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Wed Aug 01, 2018 1:23 pm
kat13254 says...



I am working on a post currently, although I can wait to post it
Edit: post ready for whenever!
Last edited by kat13254 on Wed Aug 01, 2018 3:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:17 pm
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Question @Europa would this be in a futuristic setting? Like fully electric cars kind if technology is what I was wondering.
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Wed Aug 01, 2018 4:28 pm
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@Tortwag I was actually asking about the admission of indentation. No matter what I do, it removes the spaces or tab.
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Wed Aug 01, 2018 6:05 pm
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@EthanHoover yes, precisely! Depending on what software you use to edit your texts, you need to replace spaces and tabs before publishing. You can preview the result of your pasted text using the Preview button (available before posting), and if it's a mess, you can re-modify everything as you wish.
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Wed Aug 01, 2018 6:20 pm
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@kat13254 I was thinking the technology wouldn't be much different from modern times
  





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Wed Aug 01, 2018 6:56 pm
kat13254 says...



Well electric cars are a thing, so it's not much if not at all a reach
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Wed Aug 01, 2018 11:47 pm
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@Tortwag Thanks, I'll work on it
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Sat Aug 04, 2018 4:42 pm
Europa says...



Hey @kat13254 why don't you post and get this SB moving again?
  








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