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Fri Jul 06, 2018 11:33 pm
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PrincessInk says...



I don't know if I'll include every single character (I'm writing in close 3rd POV and it might not allow for that!) but I think it would be incredibly useful if we did have a "cheat sheet" for how the cast fights in battles. Though the CPs do provide the information of their weapons, it would be nice for all the info to be in one place.

@Saen, do you think the WFP you created for this SB might be a good fit to hold that information?
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Sat Jul 07, 2018 3:32 pm
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Challenged Adventurer(s): @FalconerGal9086, @Thundahguy, @PrincessInk, @RaidenCheese, @AliceinBluue, @Lael, @Lumi, and @Tortwag.

Storybook: Aeyis

The Challenge: The team assembles!

The cast have all become stuck as their characters, and now it's time for them to explore their new world - with their friends, of course. And while they're at it, they should check out their characters' abilities. They just might find something useful.

Completion Time: eight posts

Credits Awarded: You can receive up to four credits; one for posting, one for including dialogue from another character, one for showing off your character's new skills, and one for having your post be at least seven hundred words.

The challenge has expired! It went well, I think. May the next one do the same!
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Sat Jul 07, 2018 7:37 pm
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Lumi says...



I agree with @PrincessInk! For example we can have a section of a pad scored as such:

BATTLE STYLE

Mihael
Close-quarters tooth-and-nail combat. As his blood is a ritualistic resource to incarnate his fire powers, he literally banks on being cut and shorn. He is ravenous and, as battle wages on, his bloodlust enhances, depriving him of slight tactical ability for raw power.
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Sat Jul 07, 2018 8:11 pm
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Mageheart says...



@PrincessInk, it sounds like the perfect place for that sort of thing! I'll add Arthur's fighting style a little later.
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Tue Jul 10, 2018 12:24 pm
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Mageheart says...



I apologize for not creating a section in the pad sooner! I've been busy preparing for our big trip to Canada and then actually driving to Canada, but the section is now up. I've put Arthur's fighting style down as an example.

I'd appreciate it if everyone else did the same with their characters!
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Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:01 am
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TinkerTwaggy says...



Fighting style info: successfully copied!

Neil/Andetto:

Spoiler! :
•Andetto's fighting style is about three things: analysis, control, and disruption. Using his personal book of spells, Andetto can currently summon and control up to five minions that fight alongside him with supernatural coordination, needing only a thought of his to make their moves. Though weak, individually, they can be summoned repeatedly should they fall in battle, and easily form precise formations with Andetto to disable their opponents so that Andetto himself can deliver decisive blows.

•Aside that, Andetto has the ability to modify his body to inflict more damage (such as creating a giant horn over his head, or temporarily increasing the size and strength of his claws or teeth), or modify the body of his minions for them to do his bidding.

•Finally, his final and most dangerous technique is the ability to merge his minions with himself, thus increasing his abilities by the amount of minions merged within himself. As previously stated, they are individually weak, but if he properly modified their damage output before merging, he'll benefit from every enhancement given to his minions.
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Wed Jul 18, 2018 11:52 am
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soundofmind says...



I ALSO ADDED BO'S FIGHTING INFO AFTER 5 YEARS ashlkjdf sorry I fORGOT AAAA
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Wed Jul 18, 2018 3:13 pm
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@soundofmind Pff, why the heck are you apologizing for, m'dear? It took me 4 years XD
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Wed Jul 18, 2018 3:23 pm
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lolololol just cause I was behind Tort but ALL IS WELL
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Wed Jul 18, 2018 3:51 pm
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But of course, m'dear
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Fri Jul 20, 2018 2:06 pm
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PrincessInk says...



All righty, I posted! Sorry for the looong delay. Let me know if I need to change anything!

After all, I didn't set up a fight between rival mercenaries--the fight was supposed to have been between the townspeople. But I still like the idea, and I hope to see such a thing in the future ;)
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Fri Jul 20, 2018 2:08 pm
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PrincessInk says...



Also, @RaidenCheese and @Thundahguy, I'd especially like to make sure I portrayed your characters correctly (there was some interactions between them and Ellen in the beginning of the post).
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Fri Jul 20, 2018 2:42 pm
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Mageheart says...



Your post looks wonderful, @PrincessInk! I love how you wrote their journey into town and meeting with the shop owner - especially when she saw Arthur with the others!

@Lumi, you're up next! But since it looks like only Tort and I have filled out the sparring partners section, I'm going to go through and randomly pick people to go against each other. If you want to change things up, feel free to! I just don't want to waste time waiting for replies when we could be moving ahead to some fun stuff.
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Fri Jul 20, 2018 2:52 pm
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Lael says...



Lovely post, @PrincessInk! I really enjoyed reading it.
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RaidenCheese says...



@PrincessInk Sora was portrayed wonderfully, don't worry. The only possible thing I would've done was maaybe mention that he avoided eye contact. But that's really unimportant in the grand scheme of your post.
Also, great post. I enjoyed reading through it.
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