It's awesome(and it made me realize what the "possible aspect" thing meant in the character thing, so i had to go back and edit it)! I really liked it! i just wanted to mention at the end, you said Dex saw five teens, but only four got there before him... okay, that's it the rest is PURRFECT!
Apologies for the lateness, RL stuff has been getting me down and I've not been able to give YWS the attention it deserves I might have to withdraw from the SB unfortunately.
There is only one success: to be able to spend your life in your own way, and not to give others absurd maddening claims upon it. — Christopher Darlington Morley
I might have to withdraw from the SB unfortunately.
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