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Fri Jan 19, 2018 3:29 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



"Well this day just got weird"
↑ I. Relate. So. MUCH XD But yeah, fun post!

As for the Texas thing, it didn't strike me as being over the top just yet, m'dear, but you'll prolly have to look up a few people from Texas to see how they talk, and make sure you incorporate it well.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Fri Jan 19, 2018 3:38 pm
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TheBlueCat says...



xD

I didn't want to have it seem like I was forcing it, but I might have to add a bit more. I watch a couple Texan youtubers, and they don't actually say y'all a lot but I guess it depends on what they are talking about. Eh, I'll figure it out eventually.
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Fri Jan 19, 2018 4:08 pm
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Lael says...



@TheBlueCat your use of "y'all" is just fine. Some people use it a lot more than others, so it's okay regardless.

And I'll try to get my post in sometime, though it may take a while.
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Fri Jan 19, 2018 4:18 pm
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Eventually, you'll get a good enough feel for your character for whatever you need to add to come in naturally, so yeah, you should be fine.

@Lael Good luck, m'dear! We're advancing steadily.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Fri Jan 19, 2018 4:57 pm
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Feltrix says...



@TheBlueCat, first of all, great post! But at the end, says that the characters don't know who the other people in the prophecy are. While this is technically true, they have guesses for all of the other people mentioned.
Intrepid Explorer
Squire of the Green Room
Harbinger of the Cosmic Squid
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Founder of Hermits United
TIME Magazine's 2006 Person of the Year
Dark Matter Overlord
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Fri Jan 19, 2018 7:13 pm
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TheBlueCat says...



Fixed! Thanks @Feltrix
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Tue Jan 23, 2018 11:35 am
Mageheart says...



@Lael, when do you think you'll be able to get a post up by?
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Tue Jan 23, 2018 3:26 pm
Lael says...



I honestly don't know. Definitely not this week, though. I'm keeping it in mind.
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Sun Feb 04, 2018 9:13 pm
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Challenged Adventurer(s): @saentiel, @Feltrix, @Lael, @Tortwag, @Poopsie, @TheBlueCat, @Sheytato and @Thundahguy.

The Storybook: Rei

The Challenge: First Arc - The Starting Arc

This round of posts is the start to our unconventional chosen one story! The main goal of it is to introduce the cast and having their team start to form. After all, they're going to be saving the world together! Once they figure out what they're saving it from, that is.

Completion Time: 8 posts

Credits Awarded: You can get one credit by including dialogue from at least one other character. You can get a second credit by following the plot point of your choice. A third credit can be earned if your post is at least seven hundred words for a total of three credits.

Born on the day of Reconciliation, deceased on... an unimportant date, this challenge will be missed.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Sun Feb 04, 2018 9:43 pm
Mageheart says...



Even though the challenge has officially ended, I'd love for everyone who hasn't posted yet to try following through with it. By the way, when can you get a post up, @Lael?
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Sun Feb 04, 2018 9:46 pm
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Within the next couple of weeks. I'm so sorry for the delay! Things have been so hectic and busy, but please remind me if I forget to within the time frame.
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Fri Feb 09, 2018 12:24 am
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Lael says...



I will definitely try to work on my post this weekend.
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Tue Feb 13, 2018 5:07 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



@Lael Yay for the post, m'dear!

Hmm, Jenna's thought patterns are a lot sadder than I expected them to be, buuut I guess recent memories of leaving a good home doesn't exactly help.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Tue Feb 13, 2018 11:40 pm
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Mageheart says...



Your post is perfect, @Lael! Like Tort said, her thoughts are really sad. I hope she finds some good friends in the other characters.

@Poopsie, you're up next! The WFP has what you need to include, but it's pretty simple - Joon needs to be approached by the group of friends, and you need to include why they thought it was him.

Then I'll go, which will start off the new round of posts.
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Wed Feb 14, 2018 12:17 am
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Lael says...



Oh, thanks. xD I didn't realize that it seemed so sad. And yay because I finally pulled through!
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