Young Writers Society

Made a slight fix to your post, Lumi - Ann spells her name without an e at the end.

I'll work on her post now and have it up soon. I'm going to go ahead and skip forward a few days out of necessity, but just let me know if anything is unclear.

I think I made another mistake--I just don't remember the name of Gabe's Portuguese lover. xD I just called her Irene because it rang a bell. So woops!

Edit: Dear God there are two Irenes.

Wait, I'm confused.

@Lumi I'm gonna yell at you here a bit differently than I already have on discord.
BUT WHY?

I think there’s just been a misunderstanding, but that’s okay, it doesn’t seem like it’s anything we can’t course correct.

@Lumi, @LadyLizz, correct me if any piece of this is wrong:

1. I assumed, as did Lizz, that Gabe and Irene were in a sexual relationship, and the Portuguese girl you mentioned was just another one.
2. I offered some plotting thoughts and suggestions based on this assumption.
3. You never intended that Gabe and Irene were in a sexual relationship, and instead coincidentally named the Portuguese lover Irene.

If this is true, I’m a little confused as to why you didn’t correct me before. But it’s not a huge deal.

How do you guys want to proceed?

I will just rename the Portuguese woman.

Got it. She's still Irene in your first post.

What is Gabe and Lizz's Irene's relationship with each other? Just so we're all clear.

Gabe and Irene had something in the past, but as hinted at in my first post and as I told to Lumi, she's married to a sailor getting shipped to the South Pacific. There's a fight I have planned out for my post that involves ^ all of that.
That's just what I thought the story was.

Yeah, I understood that she had a husband, but I wasn't sure how faithful or not to him she was. But I'm glad this has all been cleared up.

Ann's post is up. It's a bit on the long side, but I'm excited for you guys to read it and also to see what you guys end up being up to while we're away.

Jake will certainly want to continue that conversation with you, @Lumi, so I can make another post for him once everyone else has their second round in.

I'm glad we got the name thing cleared up because that was really confusing me too.

But @Elinor your post was great! I'm really happy to start seeing what you guys think Evelyn is like. I may have to talk with you when I we get to my post becuase I may struggle a bit with the part of actually being overseas and performing. Also, Ann is looking like I thought Evelyn would be when is comes to actually going overseas. xD We'll see what happens though.

I'm glad you think so. Yeah, Blue, I was wondering. I have some clips and things I was going to put together for you once I get the chance, there's tons of of real life examples and instances of USO shows and stars experiences performing them.

Oh good, that would be super helpful! (I'm also wondering where the dancing part came from; I never really thought of Evelyn as a good dancer but I guess she probably learned quickly when she became an actor.)

Yeah, it was common of the time. She would have learned. Cool, and I'll get you those links when I get the chance.

Okay, thanks!

Alright. Post is nearly done because I had all of these ideas swirling for the past few weeks.