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Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:23 pm
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wakarimasen says...



@Omnom sure thing, I'd love to hear those ideas! If you have them in note form, I'd love to look them over when my life is a little less hectic. :)
  





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Thu Oct 11, 2018 3:49 pm
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@Omnom, I loved the Diamond post! (I'll comment on Bleu's in a separate post, once I've read it, but I was too excited to wait. XD)

We got to see a different side of Diamond, and it's awesome for character development! It'll be cool to see her grow and deal with her handicaps over time. And oh, the spark between her and Rio was epic! If it's a spark of more than just auras, that'd be epic too, I think... We'll see what @FigrothFelanor has to say! (Although, if that happens, I suppose Valerian's luck is kind of busted. :smt043 )
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Thu Oct 11, 2018 4:14 pm
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Night is the true loner.
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Sat Oct 13, 2018 7:22 pm
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@Omnom, I have posted! @FigrothFelanor and @Lael, if you could kindly let me know if I portrayed your characters correctly, that'd be great! Rio is still exciteable and Night brash and solitary, so I think I did a good job.
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Sat Oct 13, 2018 7:39 pm
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I like how you snuck in that song. It was totally subtle xD buuut you give me an opportunity to use that for the challenge as well mwahahahhahahahahahhaa
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Ahhhhhh I loved it, @AstralHunter!!! It was so cute. Valerian, Rio, and my own standoffish lil' bean with their music. xD
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Mon Oct 15, 2018 5:51 pm
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@AllisontheWriter BATTLE BUDDIES

Also, I'm honestly surprised that Dreamcatcher is broken already! Like, wow, first day at Beacon and it didn't quite make the cut xD I guess we'll have to find another weapon for her soon!
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Tue Oct 16, 2018 12:32 pm
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Omnom wrote:@AllisontheWriter BATTLE BUDDIES

Also, I'm honestly surprised that Dreamcatcher is broken already! Like, wow, first day at Beacon and it didn't quite make the cut xD I guess we'll have to find another weapon for her soon!


How about you name the new one Dreamthrower? =P
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Sat Oct 20, 2018 6:14 pm
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Lol woooow @FigrothFelanor

Also happy late one year anniversary to this SB
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Sun Oct 21, 2018 1:08 pm
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Whoo! We're at a decent place for the time spent. ^_^

Also, I love the challenges, Omnom! They're going to be fun to implement and will actually progress the plot and/or characterisation of our characters quite well!
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Sun Oct 21, 2018 9:49 pm
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wakarimasen says...



Cool challenge! I imagine Midori will run into a bit of trouble with Weapon Practicum I. I plan on taking advantage of that plot device. xD

Since Ozpin and Guh-lyn-dahhh watched the whole Initiation from screens, I'd assume they're aware of Midori's ... er, incident. And Midori's rescuer surely reported to Oz, I'm sure. So I would assume everyone else in Midori's class/team/social circle are the ones with questions like "How'd your weapon break??? Where were you???" And of course Bleu probably wants to know all about Cloud, who's definitely on Midori's mind now.
  





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Sun Oct 28, 2018 8:56 pm
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Omni says...



So who wants to write next? @ScarlettFire and @FigrothFelanor you two haven't written in a bit, but if you're busy it's cool! I'm fine with some peeps who have written recently writing again if they're itching to (I'm getting that itch myself, but I think I'll wait xD) and we also have @Sheyren who hasn't written in awhile but still more recently than Scar and ffffff xD
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Fri Nov 02, 2018 2:27 pm
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I'd love to write, but since I went even more recently than you, I think it'd be better if you went before me. ;P
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Sun Nov 18, 2018 12:30 am
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wakarimasen says...



Can I just say that's the best portrayal of Dr. Oobleck I've ever read?
  





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AllisontheWriter wrote:Can I just say that's the best portrayal of Dr. Oobleck I've ever read?

Thanks Allison! xD
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