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Sat Sep 30, 2017 12:06 pm
Mageheart says...



That's okay with me!
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Sat Sep 30, 2017 12:10 pm
Mageheart says...



I just added something about him using his powers for the first time, but it wasn't around other people. Would that work? I could take it out if it doesn't. And could that Lucid still be Finn?
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Sat Sep 30, 2017 12:25 pm
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Terian805 says...



Yep the Lucid could still be Finn. Everything looks good now.
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Sat Sep 30, 2017 3:11 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



Hellooooo, wonderful human beings!

First off,
General Hug to Mage/Sae
↑ I don't hug people as often as I should, NOT EVEN VIRTUALLY.

Second,
Military Salute of awe-inspired person to Terian
↑ I am REALLY enjoying the concept of Dust City, so there.

There! With those things out of the way, allow me to begin.
Call me Tortwag. Just stumbled onto this concept a few days ago and I thought I'd... heh... test a few things with it by participating, if you don't mind another soul helping with shape up this wonderful lil' thingy thing :3
I'd love to take a Dreamfolk, the twist being that although they're supposed to be confined in one area they're able to manipulate to an extent, mine's manipulation would be along the lines of a treadmill so that the entire area would be able to slowly move from part to part of the city.

So, like that:

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Except a lot less flashy, a lot less technological and a lot less elaborate.


Not by much though, just enough to make it look like the area's a wanderin' shop of some sorts. Is that doable? I hope it's doable. That being said, cheers to y'all, m'dears! Uncle Twaggy's signin' out for now, but I'll get my CT after this weekend.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Sat Sep 30, 2017 3:55 pm
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Terian805 says...



Welcome @Tortwag, and that sounds good! I'm always open to having "areas" in the Dust City being really big, or other ideas, if you feel like the Dreamfolk "confining" factor is too limiting. But by all means go ahead with the treadmill idea.
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Sat Sep 30, 2017 4:07 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



Nihihihihihi... Eeeexcellent...
Ahem.

Well it's not that it's limiting. I mean, it sort of is to me, but I'm a traveling fool by nature, so, I feel like expressing that within a world that's so... personal and illogical (since it deals with dreams and, as you mentioned, not all dream-related creations are simple or nice) is fitting as long as I don't go too far or anything.

That being said, adding other areas that around Dust City is definitely something I can help with too, but I'm happy with mine being a treadmill thingy (that video up there is WHY I still love TV ads, some of them are wonderful). We'll see how that test will go. :3
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Tue Oct 03, 2017 9:01 pm
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ThemagicalEbonyFox says...



This looks really cool, but I can't decide which character type to choose.
  





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Tue Oct 03, 2017 11:03 pm
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Lael says...



Okay, I'm in. I'd like a Gifted.
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Sounds good @Lael.
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Thu Oct 05, 2017 5:54 pm
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I haven't finished my CP yet, but I plan to this weekend.

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@saentiel she unintentionally happened to be the same age as Adrian. Whoops. :D Kind of reminds me of Nero and María, lol.
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Thu Oct 05, 2017 9:58 pm
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Mageheart says...



Spoiler! :
Nero and Maria 2.0, perhaps? :P Although I think Adrian's a bit less edgy. Do you ever end up reading through that storybook? I love checking it out occasionally and reveling in the nostalgia.


I'm so excited about this storybook starting in the near future!
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Thu Oct 05, 2017 10:08 pm
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Spoiler! :
I haven't gone back and looked at Peculiarities, but I think I will sometime in the near future.
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Fri Oct 06, 2017 6:17 am
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Terian805 says...



@ThemagicalEbonyFox Two Gifted, three Lucids, three dreamfolk, and four impalpables. Any ordinary people, or Rich tourists in the Dust City are welcome too!
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Fri Oct 06, 2017 6:36 am
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I'll be an Impalpable then.
  








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