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Fri Oct 25, 2019 2:08 am
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I could easily push it to 9pm (CST)! How bout u @Wolfical? can you go later?
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Fri Oct 25, 2019 5:33 am
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Yes!
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Sun Oct 27, 2019 1:51 am
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Hey guys! @Wolfical @Lael I'm gonna post a google doc link in the discord so ya'll can hop in! WFP is being moody so I figured we'd just do it in a google doc haha
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Sun Oct 27, 2019 6:54 am
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THIS LAST POST WAS SO FUN TO WRITE WITH YA'LL ASFHGDSHLHSlkfsd
so much,,, second hand embarrassment for Brett. I'm sorry buddy,, ,but Rose is right it was funny, in the I'm-also-cringing sort of way

BUT YES UH ya'll know the drill,, ashljkgh I PASTE THE NEXT POST INFO FOR YA!!! It's fraey's time to shine again with Adina :,)

Poor Adina was at camp with Ari while all this drama is going on lol.

> The mage hunters are tracking/following them pretty much this whole time so keep that in mind! they're trying to lose 'em but they're persistent

7. After Kaia finishes her recon and sweeps the area, making sure that it's clear of mage hunters or whoever else, Adina comes to talk to Kaia after it all blows over/ ask her what happened. (Dunno how receptive Kaia will be to comfort but she can try)? Whether or not she needs comfort Adina should ask her about what happened and they can talk... pls i just want... bonding...They haven't interacted directly much!! Rose should come in at the end and kind-of apologize to Kaia - something like "I wanted to get back at Brett for the chocolate, I know you weren't there for it, sorry I guess." And shrug. @fraey (with @Lael)
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Mon Oct 28, 2019 5:12 am
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That was a great post you three! I'm quite excited to write another post for Adina C: I'm thinking I can try to write it up this weekend, or maybe during the week if time permits me. ^^
  





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Mon Oct 28, 2019 5:27 am
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YAY I’m so excited to READ it!! And of course if you want help you can poke us! Lael is the Kaia expert tho if you need Kaia help lol ;)
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Sat Nov 02, 2019 11:31 pm
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I drew the girls!!! Kaia, Rosaleen, Adina, and Rose again!!!
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Tue Nov 05, 2019 9:11 am
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and of course the guys!!
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Wed Nov 06, 2019 6:58 am
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Wolfical says...



They're all so goooood <3333 It's remarkable how consistent you are with each character's face.
stubble Brett <3
John 14:27:
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Wed Nov 06, 2019 10:46 am
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STUBBLE BRETT!!!!
also thank u so much aaaa

and fraey!! let us know if u need help or ideas!!
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Wed Nov 06, 2019 4:00 pm
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@fraey if you mean this coming weekend, I’m afraid I can’t. I’m gonna be really busy but the weekend after should be fine!
Oh to tell you my story is to tell of Him

"You will seek me and find me, when you seek me with all your heart."
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Wed Nov 06, 2019 4:34 pm
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@Lael The weekend after sounds fine! I can hopefully get some of my future homework done so I have more time then. Thanks!
  





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Tue Nov 12, 2019 7:34 am
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Good luck on your guys' collab this weekend!!! I HOPE IT WORKS OUT AND YOU HAVE FUN AND I LOOK FORWARD TO READING IT!!!!!!!! @Lael @fraey !! I WUV YOUUUUU
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Fri Nov 15, 2019 5:30 pm
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Oof I hate to say it but I have a lot going on this weekend, so I’m not sure if I can do the collab this time. That’s not to say I *can’t* do it but there isn’t a guarantee that I’ll be able to make it at a time that is good for all parties. I’m sorry since I said I could do this weekend and now it turns out that it may not work out. If you decide it’s better to just push it back, I know I’m definitely free next weekend!

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