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Wed Oct 18, 2017 1:48 am
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Wolfi says...



I have an essay to write tonight, but I'm going to get on my post asap this week!!
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Wed Oct 18, 2017 1:54 am
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soundofmind says...



@Wolfical aa ok!! If you want help/assistance feel free to yell (in a friendly way) at me or the other SB-ers! I would love to collab w/you on it if you want!
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Thu Oct 19, 2017 7:01 am
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I hope that post's okay! I wrote too much in a short amount of time and I didn't get a lot of time to polish up the last bit or proofread much because good golly I need to go to bed now xD
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Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Thu Oct 19, 2017 8:15 am
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@Wolfical!!! WONDERFUL POST! BEAUTIFULLLLL. STICKERS BARS ARE VERY IMPORTANT. Brett has his priorities straight. Haha, but dang!! HORSE POOP IN THE PITS. That's devotion right there.

One little thing - I apologize for not making this clear but at the moment Adina and Rosaleen are in a separate cell from James and Ardeshir, so they're not all in the same cell! If you wanna say which cell Brett was put in just to make it more clear that would be awesome?

@AllisontheWriter you're up next! Let us know when you think you can get it done by! (I know you're workin' right now so time is tight, so just let me know!)
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Thu Oct 19, 2017 12:08 pm
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Featherstone says...



Nice, Wolfie! :D
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Thu Oct 19, 2017 1:39 pm
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Wolfi says...



I was wondering about the cells! I'll fix that.

Thanks guys! d:
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Thu Oct 19, 2017 9:06 pm
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wakarimasen says...



Yay! It might be a good idea to push me to the last. This childminding job of mine is taking much more of my mental energy than I originally thought. Please don't kick me out just yet, but I'm going to be the weakest of the pack, I can just tell.
  





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Thu Oct 19, 2017 10:37 pm
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@AllisontheWriter that's ok with me as long as everyone else is ok with switching things up! With that in mind, would @sherlockhson like to go next then?
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Fri Oct 20, 2017 12:38 am
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I wouldn't at all mind going next!
  





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Fri Oct 20, 2017 12:40 am
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SWEET SWEET
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Sun Oct 22, 2017 7:30 am
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Ah, I did it finally! sorry it took a while! but my first SB entry is here! with much help and support from sound!

I hope it all came out okay :D
  





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Sun Oct 22, 2017 7:41 am
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@sherlockhson AAA YAY!! GREAT POST YES THANK U THANK U and yo, literally, no worries on time. You're all good.

The end tho...
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Looks like @falconergal9086 is next! In which their TooOOooOoOOTALLY FOOLPROOF plan is executed! How much of it goes exactly to plan is up to you! But they do excape and no one gets uh... mortally wounded yeah? Haha. I know sherlockhson mentioned that Rosaleen would totally fight dirty (literally) and throw dirt in the baddies' eyes or something haha. WHICH I THINK WOULD BE HUMUROUS. Is there anything you guys would wanna see happen in the fight?? haha

also I totally didn't anticipate Adina to be the glue that keeps them together in the way that she is - i thought it'd be more of a camaraderie thing but it's more like everyone's just like "MUST PROTEC" and they all wanna keep her safe lol
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Mon Oct 23, 2017 2:17 am
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Wolfi says...



@sherlockhson your post is fantastic!! I think you did a really nice job representing each of the characters.
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Mon Oct 23, 2017 3:17 am
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Thank you! :D Sound really helped me with that!
  





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Wed Nov 08, 2017 7:17 am
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soundofmind says...



@FalconerGal9086 DID AN AMAZING POST full of lots of fighting and action! Woohoo!

ARI SLAMMED THAT SMAN INTO THE GROUND

also yay more stickers bars!

@AllisontheWriter it looks like you're up next!
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