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Sat Jan 27, 2018 8:27 pm
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Wolfi says...



Oh. My. Gosh. Sound. Hahahha I love those sketches so much!! James with the gun is especially epic with that fancy perspective.
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Sat Jan 27, 2018 8:32 pm
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soundofmind says...



@Lael I’m down for this weekend! What times work for you?

@Wolfical hahaha thanks!! i thought there were a lot of fun scenes in it haha
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Wed Feb 07, 2018 7:27 pm
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The Outlands: Round Two

@FalconerGal9086 @Wolfical @Lael @AllisontheWriter @sherlockhson


Hello, fellow outlaws! Here's a re-issuing of this challenge, which we'll have until Round 2 is overwith. ;) For this challenge I want you to collaborate with a fellow SB-er on your post. You get one point for collaborating whether you're the one who posts it or not!

You'll also get one point for your post being over 700 words!

You'll receive another point for doing one of these two things:
1. Have your character express gratefulness or grief over joining the group.
2. Have your character express suspicion or trust towards one of the others in the group.

Also @FalconerGal9086 if you figure out a way for Ari to get a kitten in this round you'll get a special extra point for thineself.

Completion Time: The duration of Round Two
Credits Awarded: A possibility of 3! (and 4 for Falconer) (and one extra for each collaboration done!)

This challenge could not survive in the Outlands for long! It has expired, may it rest in peace.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Sat Feb 10, 2018 10:22 am
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soundofmind says...



Hey guys!! So I just wanted to know if the way I've been running this storybook has been okay so far for you guys? Have you been liking the outlines and posting order? Would you want outlines with vaguer guidelines so you have more freedom to be creative and imagine? Do you want more freedom or do you like the structure?

As usual, I'm always open to input on anything you guys would like to do with the story!
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I like the structure! And I like the collaborating.
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Sat Feb 10, 2018 8:03 pm
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I think it's perfectly fine as is. :)
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Sun Feb 11, 2018 7:27 am
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PHEW, good to know!! I can finally breath
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You're doing great!!
  





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soundofmind says...



POSTED! MUCH THANKS TO @Lael for helping and being wonderful

@Allisonthewriter and @Wolfical you’re up next!

Your post assignment: With their leader gone, the group fumbles around - arguing even more than usual - about whether they should go after him or not (Rosaleen has the most resistance to the idea, but they don't know why). Eventually the others overrule Rosaleen's arguments and they determine to go save him.
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Oh boy! I know Wolfie's away so I guess it's my job to write next. At the rate I'm going she might be back before I can open up WriterFeedPad without feeling guilty that I'm shirking my schoolwork, but I will try soon. :p
  





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Oh yeah! I forgot Wolfie was away ajdfgkgl but! If you want someone to collab with, I’ll be around come tomorrow! But yeah, whatever works for you!
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Tue Feb 20, 2018 11:31 pm
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SO FUN FACT: James has a horse that's not w/him right now since he got caught by Pitch and has been w/the group. I'm thinking of doing a little side-story at some point where he gets his horse Elliot back. Would ya'll be cool w/that? I have a few ideas of what happened to Elliot/where he's at at the moment.

Though!! I don't want him to hog the spotlight. So if you have any ideas of things you'd want to tie into that or side stories of your own you want to explore, or whatever, HIT ME UP man.
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also sorry to double post but my little sister started reading through the sb and told me that she's gonna start calling Kaia "kinda nesquik" and I died
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Thu Mar 15, 2018 8:33 am
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Hey Outlands crew! I just thought I should let you know that, for the time being, @AllisontheWriter is stepping out for a bit and Adina will be a NPC until life calms down for Allison and she's able to come back w/strength to the SB! You'll be dearly missed for however long you need to be away but whenever you're ready to come back - we'll be here! <3

Until then, I've taken this next post for Adina, but from now on, we'll just split posts between the four of us and not worry about writing necessarily from Adina's POV, but just continuing to write her character in the story ofc.
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The challenge in the spoiler below has expired and been removed from the main storybooks thread. Happy Storybooking!

Spoiler! :
The Outlands[/url]: Round Two[/size]

@FalconerGal9086 @Wolfical @Lael @AllisontheWriter @sherlockhson[/center]

For this challenge I want you to collaborate with a fellow SB-er on your post, for which you will get one point!

You'll also get one point for your post being over 700 words!

Completion Time: The duration of Round Two
Credits Awarded: A possibility of 2!
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