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Sun Apr 08, 2018 1:19 am
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



If that's the case I will write something up for Torrin.
  





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Sun Apr 08, 2018 9:10 pm
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I hope that fit with the feel of what was going on. Nothing really new being done just some character interaction.
  





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Mon Apr 09, 2018 10:40 am
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Jaybird says...



I love the dialogue between Zel and Torrin. I think they're going to be great friends. (Also, she'd totally be his wingman with Exliana.)
stop trying.
take long walks. look at scenery. doze off at noon.
don’t even think about flying.
and then, pretty soon,
you’ll be flying again.
  





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Mon Apr 09, 2018 10:51 pm
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Sheyren says...



@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX I loved the post! Character interaction is extremely important with such a large a cast, so it was wonderful to see a list highlighting it.

Now, who wants to post next? Whoever it is gets to start an attack on the kingdom by the rebel wyverns. >:)
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Mon Apr 09, 2018 11:51 pm
PrincessInk says...



I think I can! Haven't written a post here for awhile.
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Tue Apr 10, 2018 12:49 am
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Sheyren says...



Wonderful! Feel free to ask if you have any questions or need anything!
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 1:23 am
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Oh, right! Some highly important information I forgot to share with the new members. The easiest way to kill a wyvern is to puncture their stomach, because it causes the fire inside them to blow them up in a huge fireball.
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 2:35 am
PrincessInk says...



Oh, interesting to know, @Sheyren! I may use that (read: most likely use it) in my post.

Anyway, also I'd like to know where everybody is when the wyverns attack! And I don't know, maybe I missed it, but when will they attack? I just want to know so I can write accordingly.

I think I'll come up with more questions later :)
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Wed Apr 11, 2018 10:28 am
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Everyone is currently flying back to the kingdom I'm the backs of allied wyverns, and they will have just arrived at the kingdom as the wyverns are attacking.
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Fri Apr 13, 2018 6:35 pm
AliceinBluue says...



Would it be alright if i wrote a super quick interaction between Piryyah and her mentor for character development reasons? I could have it up by the end of tonight if I got the go-ahead.
  





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Fri Apr 13, 2018 6:36 pm
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Go ahead given!
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Sat Apr 14, 2018 3:38 am
AliceinBluue says...



Posted! Not as short as I had originally planned, but oh well!!!
  





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Tue Apr 17, 2018 1:30 pm
Lumi says...



@AliceinBluue --> I loved your post ^^ I look forward to more Pihrrya (sp?) and Ahmed interactions! He'd totally be down to showing her some sweet moves and unleashing her funky flow, though I'd wager their styles of fighting are much different, hah.
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Wed Apr 18, 2018 8:16 pm
PrincessInk says...



Just to let you know, I don't think I'll be able to get a post up right now, so somebody else can do the wyvern attack scene. Going to be busy.
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Fri Apr 20, 2018 4:48 pm
Sheyren says...



Alrighty, that's fine, @PrincessInk!

Anyways, I'm fresh out of watching My Hero Academia, and now that I'm in the mood for Shounen, I'm once again seriously driven to get this thing moving (this is very Shounen-inspired, had you not noticed). So, I'm going to be an annoying DM once again.

That being said, I really would like a post from either @falconergal9086 or @feltrix, as their characters have been kind of pushed to the back in light of recent posts. Are either of you able to post next?
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"I give you permission to use 'Sheyster. Sheyfia. Shey Boss. Don Shey.' as a signature quote. XD
- BrumalHunter"

THIS NEEDS TO CHANGE."
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