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The Curse of the Phoenix [DT]



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Sat Oct 14, 2017 3:18 pm
Lael says...



Same as Swords, probably.
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Sat Oct 14, 2017 3:33 pm
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I'm in central time but I'm free on the weekends!
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 3:49 pm
Jaybird says...



Whenever you're free, @Sheytato. :P I love the most recent posts, by the way!
stop trying.
take long walks. look at scenery. doze off at noon.
don’t even think about flying.
and then, pretty soon,
you’ll be flying again.
  





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Sun Oct 15, 2017 5:02 pm
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Omnom says...



I'm free for the rest of today hopefully then friday, saturday, and sunday of next week because of fall break at my college. My activity will be spotty after that because college loves throwing surprises at me
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 5:04 pm
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Sheyren says...



Gotcha. :) We can always temp NPC Miirah if you need it.
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 5:27 pm
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Lumi says...



Incoming post today between Miirah and Ahmed (Gabe and a new Mentor) before Shey's next movement begins because #chemistry.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 8:01 pm
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And it's posted! Lemme know your thoughts on Miirah and Ahmed and their two mentors! I can't wait for all of us to meet each other.
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 8:19 pm
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Jaybird says...



I love your post so much! I love how you hinted at a shared history between the two but didn't give it all away in your post. I'm also thrilled at the thought of see all of our characters together. Having Zel interact with the others is going to be very entertaining!
stop trying.
take long walks. look at scenery. doze off at noon.
don’t even think about flying.
and then, pretty soon,
you’ll be flying again.
  





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Sun Oct 15, 2017 8:23 pm
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Lumi says...



D'bura is such a lovely home. I promise Ahmed will take you all one day (as an army) to deal with the Oer Akhan!
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 8:41 pm
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Now all we gotta do is wait on @Sheytato... @Sheytato

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Sun Oct 15, 2017 10:49 pm
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Sheyren says...



@Omnom @Omnom @Omnom My computer is updating (bleh), so I'll have it up later tonight.

EDIT: Or now, since it finished updating. By the way, loved your posts.
"Also #2:
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"I give you permission to use 'Sheyster. Sheyfia. Shey Boss. Don Shey.' as a signature quote. XD
- BrumalHunter"

THIS NEEDS TO CHANGE."
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 11:33 pm
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Lael says...



Oh man, my dear, snooty princeling is at it again. xD Good job, Shey.
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Mon Oct 16, 2017 12:55 am
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Sheyren says...



I'm glad he was in character. XD
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"I give you permission to use 'Sheyster. Sheyfia. Shey Boss. Don Shey.' as a signature quote. XD
- BrumalHunter"

THIS NEEDS TO CHANGE."
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Mon Oct 16, 2017 6:16 pm
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Sheyren says...



BY THE WAY @XxXTheSwordsmanXxX will be posting next, so you're all aware.
"Also #2:
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"I give you permission to use 'Sheyster. Sheyfia. Shey Boss. Don Shey.' as a signature quote. XD
- BrumalHunter"

THIS NEEDS TO CHANGE."
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Tue Oct 17, 2017 2:50 am
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Sheyren says...



Sorry for the double post, but I just wanted to advertise the Discord server I made for this SB (and actually all of mine)! (Link: https://discord.gg/2TKHZG9)
What is Discord, you ask? It's a great chatting service, similar to Skype, but in the case of my server, minus the video chat. Basically, it provides easy, real time chatting, great for planning, and kinda like the WFP.
In a pretty heavily plotted SB, it would do well. The service is completely free, and can be downloaded through the app, on PC and Mac and Linux, or just accessed by logging in on your browser. I would really love if you consider joining, but if you are uncomfortable with it or can't for whatever reason, tis fine. <3
"Also #2:
Code: Select all
"I give you permission to use 'Sheyster. Sheyfia. Shey Boss. Don Shey.' as a signature quote. XD
- BrumalHunter"

THIS NEEDS TO CHANGE."
- AstralHunter
  








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