@DemonGoddess, could you please get your post up by tomorrow night? I don't want to do what I'm going to say next, but I've been asking you to get a post up for the past week. Each time that you say you'll do it, you don't. The storybook is stalling right now, and we haven't even gotten to the actual plot.
So if you don't get your post up by tomorrow night, I'll ask someone else to write the part where the characters all enter the haunted house.
I loved your post, @DemonGoddess! I just have one request - could you please remove the mention of Luke from your post? I think I may have said more about it in the WFP, but he's not there at that moment. He's going there on his own, and he'll get there in my post.
I'll write up a new challenge, new post and the plot for the following posts (in the writerfeedpad) by the end of this upcoming weekend. Does anyone have any ideas for things they think should happen? I have a very general plot in mind so I'm open to suggestions.
I was thinking they could run into something interesting. The characters could then begin to show how they could react to it, whatever it could be. Like a ghost when it was a shadow on a wall or thump when it was a tree hitting the house.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)
You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
What about after they leave the mansion? I was thinking I could write the scene where Luke arrives and they get attacked, but I'm not sure where to go from there?
They could go back to their normal lives but perhaps hint at the danger that could later happen? Because what happened in the haunted house is presumably "normal" (excluding the contract they all signed with Luke) or something and they could then just leave and have that "I'm glad I spent Halloween with my friends" ordeal. Also, do they remember signing the contract with Luke because if they don't, then the characters could get like these faint memories of what happened but they all just assume it is just "dreams/nightmares" they have?
Sorry if that is jumbled and if I got anything wrong, let me know!
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)
You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
thanks!
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