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Tue Nov 21, 2017 7:18 am
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Wolfi says...



Thanks guys! Yes, Savitri was definitely the more obvious leader but sound and I agreed that it would be better (or at least more interesting) for our respective characters' growth if we switched it up!
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Mon Dec 25, 2017 11:41 pm
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Lael says...



Never fear, everyone! I will be posting soon, and our squabbling heroes will soon be on their way.
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Thu Jan 04, 2018 1:28 am
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A post is on its way! It should be up within the next few days. Sorry for the long wait, everyone.
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Thu Jan 04, 2018 1:33 am
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soundofmind says...



No worries!!! I look forward to it! :D
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Thu Jan 04, 2018 12:00 pm
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Lightsong says...



Me too! :D Can't wait to get back to this.
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Thu Jan 04, 2018 10:32 pm
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Atticus says...



Not a problem at all! I can't wait to see where this storyline takes us :)
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Thu Jan 04, 2018 11:49 pm
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Lael says...



Posted. I tried to avoid too much dialogue right now, since I'd like to leave your characters' actions and thoughts about the others up to you. For those who did have a speaking part in my post, let me know if I portrayed anyone wrong.

For now, they're just setting up camp, but what minor details occur is up to your creative interpretation.

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Fri Jan 05, 2018 12:54 am
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soundofmind says...



Do you care who posts next? I might not get to this right away since i have three other SB posts in my to-get-to list
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Fri Jan 05, 2018 2:21 am
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Lael says...



No, I don't. Whoever wants to go.
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Fri Jan 05, 2018 12:11 pm
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I'll try getting one in asap.
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Sat Jan 06, 2018 9:51 pm
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Wolfi says...



Nice post, Lael! You portrayed Savitri very well!
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Fri Jan 12, 2018 2:55 pm
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soundofmind says...



POSTED! Hopefully I wrote the characters alright. If there's anything I totally messed up on, please let me know and I can change it!

Hopefully this gives whoever goes next a place to pick up on? Also I hope the imp idea was okay... hah,, I kinda just got inspired and went with it aaa

It think whoever goes next tho should do a bit with Melvix and Willow though! Since I didn't really have a scene w/them at all :0
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Fri Jan 12, 2018 4:45 pm
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Wolfi says...



Daaaang, sound! Love that post. The perspective switches are cool and the imp deer is interesting!
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Fri Jan 12, 2018 4:51 pm
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Lael says...



That is actually almost exactly what I was thinking for that part. :) Good post, @soundofmind!
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Fri Jan 12, 2018 4:56 pm
soundofmind says...



!!! omg!! thanks guys!!! phew, i worked pretty hard on it lol so im glad it works!!
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