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Battle School DT



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Sun Jun 11, 2017 3:23 am
Basil says...



So for some reason my post looked ... big. As in the text was big and bold. Why?

I fixed it though. Sorry about that everyone.
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 3:41 am
TinkerTwaggy says...



@Basil I totally thought that was a font choice that happened for... some reason, but okay it WAS an accident. Huh.

@Chaser I love him. I... I love him already.
Last edited by TinkerTwaggy on Sun Jun 11, 2017 9:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 3:51 am
LordZeus says...



@jimss23 that's fine by me. Perhaps Sully could even mistake Devon as a southerner right off the bat? That would really annoy him :D

Hey by the way, was wondering, will the students here have roommates like they do in other schools? Just asking because that could turn out pretty interesting.
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 6:40 am
Basil says...



Juuuuust out of curiosity, @jimss23 what's the inspiration behind the name of your character? (Sullivan, I mean)
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 7:36 am
TinkerTwaggy says...



@jimss23 Also, just remembered @Sheyren didn't post yet. We may want to wait one or two days to allows another trusty SB member to catch up, juuust in case.
Also, just 'cause I'm slightlu surprised: Cassandra's the little girl, right? No because wow, she doesn't loud like a kid at all anymore, is it because she's talking to Sullivan?
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 9:04 am
sheysse says...



GAH! You people are going very fast! Shoot, I haven't even posted!

Okay, so I will desperately try and get a post up today, but I may have to run into tomorrow. It depends on what happens.
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 9:05 am
Terian805 says...



I love the way you portrayed Esedra, @Chaser, and Ozy makes me chuckle. :D
"You can't live over your shoulder, overbehind."
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 9:35 am
TinkerTwaggy says...



@Sheyren I want to question your newest avatar... XD
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 10:48 am
sheysse says...



First post is finally up! (Yay!) Hope you guys are okay with some of the stuff I hinted at. If I need to change anything, just tell me.
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 11:09 am
LordZeus says...



Hey @Sheyren nice post :D. Just one thing, Devon wouldn't really come to sit next to her, but he would definitely invite her to sit at his table, probably the bulk of the northern students, and would even tell them of her courage in trying to confront the assassin.

Also you may want to fix the coding that puts a part near the bottom if your post including dialogue in italics.
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 11:14 am
jimss23 says...



@Basil

As with all my names, right out of my butt. No I didn't name him after a monsters inc character.

@Tortwag

Cassie is the girl. Cassandra is Cassandra Wells. She is in the power point
This is the Rule of Three
Every writer's most sacred oath
Two boys to challenge each other
One girl to challenge them both

-Jim
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 11:17 am
TinkerTwaggy says...



@jimss23 Okay, so I'm not entirely crazy! Whew.

@Sheyren THE SHYNESS OF HER PROFILE IS GONE IN HER POST, ARGH
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  





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Sun Jun 11, 2017 1:35 pm
sheysse says...



@LordZeus Good to know, fixed it. And wow, that was easily the worst coding error I've ever made. :o

@Tortwag ;)
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 9:55 am
Basil says...



@jimss23 actually it only clicked when Cassandra referred to him as Sully.
He has the same name as my freaking dog, man xD
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  








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