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Sat Jun 03, 2017 8:13 pm
Steggy says...



I'm having some problems even finding the motivation to do stuff. I'm being lazy and might consider dropping out of this storybook by the looks of things.
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Wed Jun 07, 2017 10:21 am
BrumalHunter says...



@SpiritedWolfe, is it all right if I use your character profile as a guideline to make mine?
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Wed Jun 07, 2017 3:58 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



Certianly, Hunter! That's why she's there, to give an idea of what I'm thinking ^^ (I'm excited to meet the person who will probably become most fed up with Riss xD)

I'm sorry to hear that, @Dino D: If you feel like you need some extra help, motivation, please feel free to ask. But I understand if you need to drop -- if it's not fun it's not worth stressing about it.

Completely understandable @Wolfical! Take your time and school comes first. ~

Sorry for being so absent. This is the first time I've had any reliable internet since we arrived xD
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Sun Jun 11, 2017 1:34 am
SpiritedWolfe says...



So, I just got back from vacation and I'm kind of tired and lazy, BUT. I want to kick a bit of life into this. I'm not giving up.

On Monday and Tuesday, June 12th and 13th respectively, at 7:00 pm EDT both days, I will be in the all encompassing pad. A link it posted on the first DT post. Please, please, please try to make it to at least one for at least a moment. I would love characters to be finished by then so we can start talking about plot, but if yours isn't, I would be so happy to help.

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Sun Jun 11, 2017 2:57 am
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KiraThePotatoChip says...



Yeah, I'm on vacation right now, so I probably won't be making it to the pad. I'll try to finish my character by tomorrow, but I might not be doing a whole lot oflot of Abington until later
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Sun Jun 11, 2017 4:56 am
Wolfi says...



The impure are the counterparts to angels in heaven. Every angel has an impure that encompasses every negative trait they could have possessed.

Would a fallen ever know who their impure counterpart is? Do they look similar?
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Sun Jun 11, 2017 3:58 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



Kira, I understand that! Thank you for still working on your character though ^^ Hope your vacation goes well ~

And Wolfie, that's not something I'd really thought about. I'm assuming it's not very common for a fallen to find their impure counterpart and because they're not in heaven anymore, it's not as vital they "balance" one another since now they're in the same space (and the fallen isn't perfect anymore). I'm thinking they would probably look similar but probably not identical. Like, probably as close as two unrelated strangers can get. That's an interesting thought!
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Sun Jun 11, 2017 9:50 pm
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Noelle says...



I apologize for going awol. Life is kicking my butt per usual. I'm almost done my character and should have him in by tomorrow.
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Mon Jun 12, 2017 11:37 pm
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Craz says...



Wolfe and I are in the pad and are ready to go over characters and plotties if anyone wants to joinnnn~
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Tue Jun 13, 2017 11:23 pm
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Hey guys, we only have 3 characters in and characters were due Sunday! Please get them in as soon as possible so we can start, and I'm on the pad if anyone needs any ideas or help.
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Wed Jun 14, 2017 9:03 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



Is anyone available for discussion in about an hour or so? Err, I'm not allowed to eat or drink anything after 6:00 AM tomorrow morning, so if either of you are likely to be awake between eleven and one, I would be happy to chat then too, for once.

EDIT: I'm being chased off to bed already, so I hope the other option is a possibility. I'd like to get the profile up soon, so as not to delay this on my behalf.
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Fri Jun 16, 2017 12:04 am
KiraThePotatoChip says...



For whatever reason I can't access WFP on my phone, so I can't make any character or write a post. This vacation was sprung on me, so I really can't do anything in the road. Wolfe I know my character played a big part in the story, but I can't do anything until the Monday after next week.
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Fri Jun 16, 2017 2:59 am
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SpiritedWolfe says...



@KiraThePotatoChip Hey, I understand you're on vacation (and I hope you're having a good time ^^) but there was plenty of time for you to finish your character before that, considering the original deadline was a week and a half ago before you had left. Delaying the start of the SB any longer would make it harder to keep up momentum. And, as I stated at the beginning of the Storybook, I'm leaving next week for five weeks with no access to the internet. Which is why I really would like to start before I leave.

All of that has been to say that Craz and I think that it would be best to make the guardian character an NPC, since the role is so vital to the kickstart of the storybook. You would certainly have pick at the remaining roles, and I strongly suggest the magician, since you have previously expressed interest in magically powerful characters. How does that sound?
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Fri Jun 16, 2017 3:26 am
KiraThePotatoChip says...



Sorry for the inconvenience, as it turns out, I can access WFP. My main problem was transferring the revised character, but she's in now. Phones don't really seem to agree with me right now
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