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Tue Apr 04, 2017 1:07 pm
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JustJasper says...



Here is the DT

Writerfeedpad: http://oswin1800.writerfeedpad.com/1
Last edited by JustJasper on Sun Apr 09, 2017 10:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories.
It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

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Tue Apr 04, 2017 1:20 pm
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Saruka says...



Hey guys!
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Tue Apr 04, 2017 7:55 pm
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Lael says...



. . . I'd feel bad if I didn't join back up. I will change my charrie.
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Tue Apr 04, 2017 8:50 pm
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Europa says...



Hey there! I'll have my CP up by Friday!
  





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Tue Apr 04, 2017 9:04 pm
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Awesome guys! Hopefully we can begin to discuss the plot again soon and grow our cast once again.
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories.
It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

-Greg Bear
  





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Tue Apr 04, 2017 9:08 pm
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Feltrix says...



Hello! This looks interesting.
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Tue Apr 04, 2017 9:21 pm
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You are welcome to join if you want @Feltrix! Just submit a character sheet.
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories.
It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

-Greg Bear
  





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Tue Apr 04, 2017 9:22 pm
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Feltrix says...



Done.
Intrepid Explorer
Squire of the Green Room
Harbinger of the Cosmic Squid
Brief Castaway
Founder of Hermits United
TIME Magazine's 2006 Person of the Year
Dark Matter Overlord
Kind of a Big Deal
  





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Tue Apr 04, 2017 9:24 pm
JustJasper says...



Awesome just remember that they are a team sent to investigate a new dimension so they have to be in their late teens and early twenties at the very youngest.
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories.
It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

-Greg Bear
  





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Wed Apr 05, 2017 7:23 pm
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Europa says...



@Oswin1800 I have a question about this team.

How were these guys chosen? were they all part of some group together, or were they just picked up off the streets because they had a certain quality or power necessary to the success of the mission? How are all these characters connected?

Also, are we going with a different dimension or using the same one as as last time?
  





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Wed Apr 05, 2017 7:28 pm
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I'm not sure about how we are going to do the dimensions yet. Perhaps another vote?

The team was selected by the government or science organization of the dimension our characters came from. If it helps imagine NASA found a new planet and could send people to it. What kinds of people would they send? We can argue that because of the nature of the portal they had to send relatively young people which our characters seem to be. It is safe to say that some of them may have worked together previously and some may have been added just for the mission. It could go a lot of different directions if we wanted it to. Some of the characters could have snuck in at the last second as well. The idea is pretty open.

-Ossie
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories.
It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

-Greg Bear
  





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Sun Apr 09, 2017 10:30 pm
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Alright you guys we need to work on building our character slate right now. Once we get a few more characters we can start to post in the storybook. I have created a writerfeedpad and I will put the link below and in my first post. I will try to go in there every day and hopefully I can chat with you all about the characters we have now. If anyone knows people that would like to join please let them know!

We can't start until we get at least 3 more characters to work with. That's the goal at least.

http://oswin1800.writerfeedpad.com/1

-Ossie
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories.
It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

-Greg Bear
  





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Sun Apr 09, 2017 11:13 pm
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Lael says...



Sorry, I'll get my CP up within this coming week! Or maybe in a few hours!

EDIT: Done! :) It's up.
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Mon Apr 10, 2017 12:25 am
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Lael says...



@Oswin1800 do you want to get on the Pad? I can talk some if you'd like to discuss stuff over the plot and Seung.
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Mon Apr 10, 2017 12:27 am
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Yeah that would be great but I can't for another 30 minutes. @Lael
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories.
It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

-Greg Bear
  








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