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Sun Mar 05, 2017 10:31 pm
Featherstone says...



Ah XD. I use HeroMachine 3. You can get the link easily by googling it.
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Mon Mar 06, 2017 4:43 pm
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For the characters I'm going to make avatars if you haven't or aren't going to. If it doesn't look accurate to you, let me know and I'll change it.
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Wed Mar 08, 2017 6:56 pm
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*bumps*
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Thu Mar 09, 2017 3:08 pm
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@regismare: No pressure, but when do you think you can get your post up?
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Thu Mar 09, 2017 7:17 pm
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@featherstone9086 done! I'll be more punctual in the future :3 If there's anything I need to change, particularly with my portrayal of Aspen, just say and I shall : )

(sorry more questions: do werewolves 'keep their minds', so to speak, when they transform? And, can they transform at will? Do extreme emotions trigger a transformation? Finally, how would the hunters actually react if he transformed around them?)
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Thu Mar 09, 2017 7:24 pm
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@regismare Dude, awesome post. One thing though, Echo's color is black and white. You mentioned him being a russet color. >.>
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Thu Mar 09, 2017 7:30 pm
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@ChieRynn Thank you <3 and ooops. I'll change that. Sorry - I was going on the whole falcons-are-brown-or-red-probably idea (we only have red kites and buzzards were I live, so I thought Echo'd be reddish like them ^^")

(your avatar makes me so happy. I smile whenever I see it, seriously)
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Fri Mar 10, 2017 3:17 am
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@regismare: First, great post.

Second, I should probably let you know that the Hunters keep one fang from each wolf they kill on a thong on their belt. Just to freak your character out more.

Third, you have red kites?! DUDE I AM SO JEALOUS!

Lastly, your questions. For the most part, no, they do not keep their minds. They become a feral predator that will hurt anything that they don't consider dominant over them or their pack. Fear/anger/feeling threatened can trigger a transformation. If he transformed....well, if it was in the stronghold, he'd either be killed or captured. If it was just with the squad, Mel wouldn't have the heart to kill him and would just neutralize him so he couldn't hurt anyone.
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Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:03 pm
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Whoo! My turn.
Just got some questions. As a healer and not someone who's going to be fighting, does Ari stick around and train with the rest of her squad or do other things?
  





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Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:14 pm
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I'll write up the class list later today or this weekend. You would be doing some of the same training with them and other training that is different
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Fri Mar 10, 2017 6:44 pm
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@featherstone9086 thank you <3 and I know right? Red kites are sooo pretty, and I love their tails. They usually perch around our astroturf so I see them quite a lot.
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Fri Mar 10, 2017 7:07 pm
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<3 that is amazing I am so jealous. If you get a pic, send it to me, would ya? They are so awesome. And np, it's what I'm here for
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Fri Mar 10, 2017 8:21 pm
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Classes has been added in under dogs, @AlyTheBookworm
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Sat Mar 11, 2017 5:55 am
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Nice post, @AlyTheBookworm! If I'm not mistaken, it's your turn, @rebelpilot.
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Sat Mar 11, 2017 6:09 am
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@featherstone9086 i'm going to post tomorrow.
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