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Blood on the Tundra [DT]



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Tue Aug 01, 2017 2:11 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Oh dear Lord. XD

Do you want to use the CT' s made? Or make your own?
  





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Tue Aug 01, 2017 2:30 pm
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sheysse says...



I'll use the already made ones... My characters will really take shape when I write their first posts, so honestly the CTs aren't too important. I'll try and get up a first post tomorrow.

I expect Eli to maybe have suspected something would happen, and show up to the party after Alik has taken care of all the trouble.
  





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Tue Aug 01, 2017 2:51 pm
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I will have the ending to that scene up by the end of the day. And most likely yes. XD I expect everyone to have some very harsh reactions.
  





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Tue Aug 01, 2017 5:42 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I think that should be a good jump off point for Sheyren. XD
  





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Tue Aug 01, 2017 6:18 pm
sheysse says...



Sorry for the double post, but what other countries exist? Do we have a map, or can I make up names?
  





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Tue Aug 01, 2017 6:30 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



WE don't have a map but there are the two main countries. Tundra and Plains. There is a third country that is only mentioned in reference at the moment called Geltir, which is where the healing magic and Alik's (now broken) sword came from. outside of that I haven't made much of a world. XD
  





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Tue Aug 01, 2017 8:38 pm
sheysse says...



So are there objections to me writing out the idea for certain countries to have reason for supporting the war? i.e. a country that gets paid for troops, or one which wants leftover land from the war?
  





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Tue Aug 01, 2017 8:42 pm
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None at all. I simply started that the war has made certain individuals rich. If you would like to elaborate I have no issues.
  





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Tue Aug 01, 2017 9:23 pm
sheysse says...



Short first post is up! Admittedly, it doesn't move the plot along in the slightest, but I'm gonna write another post up tomorrow, from Delilah's perspective.
  





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Tue Aug 01, 2017 9:57 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I like your additions to the world @Sheyren. It makes a lot of sense for a centuries long war to have those kinds of connections.

I would like to put out that for those that are interested. Ideas to restart the war are welcome. I am open to all suggestions.
  





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Wed Aug 02, 2017 12:41 am
Wolfi says...



Ooooh Swordsman your post is great! The brotherly love is so sweet.

Shey, I'm so happy you're joining us! Nice post too.
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Thu Aug 03, 2017 1:09 pm
sheysse says...



Sorry it was a day late, but Delilah post is now up!

I gave her a sorta monk-like thing, and I'll let you decide if you think it actually works of is just their imagination. And then I had some tension with Desmond. Yay.
  





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Thu Aug 03, 2017 1:40 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



It was a good post Sheyren. Who would like to go next?
  








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