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Blood on the Tundra [DT]



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Fri Feb 10, 2017 7:09 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Any plot ideas, twists, concerns, or questions, please place them here.
  





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Fri Feb 10, 2017 8:04 pm
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Some plot point that I would like to do in the future:

Alik playing a Tundra Yuletide song on his violin to helps ease their arrival.

An attack on the youngest princess that involves her betrothed fighting that assassin and 1) revealing that angry side of him that he is worried she will fear in him and 2) him becoming badly wounded in the fight.

Alik being met by someone in the music room as he is playing where he speaks about being afraid to face his betrothed again, not wanting to see the fear of him in her eyes.
  





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Fri Feb 10, 2017 10:24 pm
Wolfi says...



I'll take an eldest prince from the Plains, please!
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Fri Feb 10, 2017 10:26 pm
XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



@Wolfical

No problem. Put up a CT.
  





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Sat Feb 11, 2017 3:11 pm
Lael says...



I think I'll give the youngest princess a try. Sounds like an interesting role to play... CP will be up at a later time.
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Sat Feb 11, 2017 3:20 pm
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A question: So the Plains royal family name is Stormwind? Will you be making up the Tundra royal family name too?
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Sat Feb 11, 2017 3:25 pm
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Can I take the eldest princess please? :)
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Sat Feb 11, 2017 6:13 pm
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@Lael

I hadn't previously but since I have two requests at the same time, let go with...Northguard. If you have better suggestions please let me know.

@Remington38

of course you may.
  





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Sat Feb 11, 2017 6:55 pm
Lael says...



Okay, I'm good with Northguard! :) Youngest princess's CP will be up today, I think.

More questions:
Do the princes and princesses already know about the others (what they look like, what their habits are, etc.)?
Also, since you said you want Alik to play a Tundra Yuletide song, is it going to be a calm or more lively type of tune?
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Sat Feb 11, 2017 7:10 pm
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@Lael

Good questions! First off...No the princes and the princess have only heard of each other through reference. None of them know what any of the others look like or their mannerisms.

Second Alik's Yuletide song is more of a fun song to dance to.

Actually it is this song, not an actual Yuletide song but it is a song for celebration and has a lot of fiddle in it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8CgBs3-BlqA
  





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Sat Feb 11, 2017 7:20 pm
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Great! Both of my ideas work perfectly then! (My princess loves to dance to lively tunes.)

And aaaahhhhhhh! I love Celtic Woman!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yaaaaaaaaaaay!!! :) (Sorry, fangirling a little...)
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Sat Feb 11, 2017 9:47 pm
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When is the latest date at which you'd like to start the SB?
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Sat Feb 11, 2017 10:24 pm
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End of February hopefully.
  





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Sun Feb 12, 2017 4:32 am
Wolfi says...



Finished my CP ~

I'm excited for this :D
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Sun Feb 12, 2017 5:06 am
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I am excited to see your CP too @Wolfical since we are to be wed XD
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