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Any suggestions for some Delmont cussing?

We could even have phrases like we do in English. You know, when someone says, "Oh for goodness sake!" We know they're displeased. Something along those lines?

Sorry, I meant we make up our own swear words for the people of Delmont. E.g. Averil swears, "Smoldering ashes!" because that's what the villagers in her hometown say. Something like that.

And I also don't mind the amount of swearing too much; it's the choice of words that bothers me. I wouldn't mind the swearing too much if you used milder curse words.

PrincessInk wrote:Sorry, I meant we make up our own swear words for the people of Delmont. E.g. Averil swears, "Smoldering ashes!" because that's what the villagers in her hometown say. Something like that.

And I also don't mind the amount of swearing too much; it's the choice of words that bothers me. I wouldn't mind the swearing too much if you used milder curse words.

I come from the worst part of a city where I live, the words I did use were pretty mild to the ones I normally use. I only used seven words in all and of those seven two were F-bombs the rest are pretty mild at least to me. But Like I said I'm willing to try and cut down and cut out f-bombs if need be

Thank you! I also made up a list of possible Delmont swear words:



And I added more to the WriterFeedPad

So as a hypothetical, who wants their dragon to run into Hali later? Since he smelled another one and all.

@Lael

I was planning on that being Falia at some point. After all we have Samuel meeting Kaia in the city.

@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX all right, that's actually what I wanted.

So who's going to post next?

I'll put one up for Valkir and Asgal. Something truly horrific. There is supposed to be an interaction with Samuel and another rider before he leaves but I haven't seen a post yet.

Nice post, @XxXTheSwordsmanXxX. No offense, but Valkir is a truly horrible guy and you showed it very well.

Speaking of which, do you think Valkir can run into Averil in Verdana?I thought it would be interesting if Averil ran down to grab some travelling supplies--and LOTS of perfume--and bumped into a Rider there? What do you think?

@PrincessInk

No offense taken. Valkir is supposed to be a horrible, horrible person.

Hmmm....Yeah Valkir might overlook her as a Rider with that...hungry stare of his. Do we want him to realize that she is the rider? Or have her manage to sneak away?

@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX

She could sneak away, but somebody else could be suspicious.

Hungry stare? What do you mean by that?

And Averil will douse herself and Glacia with perfume after Glacia felt as though she could smell some dragon near their home to disguise their scent. That's my plan. Though people will feel strange why she wants so much perfume.

@PrincessInk

Well....It is the same look that he gives the daughter in his first post. Likely to creep her out.

Let's see. I think this is a different city than the one that Kaia and Samuel will be at. We'll need to figure out how Averil meets the Rebellion as well.

Guys, you keep saying my character's name wrong. >.< It's Ceridwen, not Ceridren lol

O_O



I don't think I ever used "Ceridwen", but I'll remember to spell it correctly ha ha