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The Curse of the Wyvern [DT]



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Sat Aug 19, 2017 5:21 pm
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sheysse says...



Triple posting to announce that we have a DISCORD SERVER. https://discord.gg/NBppCV *BOOM*

Yeah, I know I tried this before, but I'm confident this time it'll work better. If you haven't ever tried Discord, I highly encourage you to. It can be a lot of fun. :)
  





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Sat Aug 19, 2017 7:35 pm
Mageheart says...



Since the fight hasn't actually begun yet, I'm going to go back and change my last post. I thought that the battle was supposed to begin in Sius'. I'll just exclude the part about the battle and keep in the wyvern. Great post, by the way, @Feltrix!
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Sat Aug 19, 2017 8:56 pm
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sheysse says...



The fight has begun... It was backwards writing. You don't need to edit anything.
  





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Sat Aug 19, 2017 9:13 pm
Mageheart says...



@Sheytato, the last point mentioned how they knew what the purpose of the caves were, but in my post they had no idea. Changing the ending of my post made more sense - that way my post could have been recon and the newest post can be leading up to the fight.
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Sat Aug 19, 2017 10:13 pm
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Okay then. Sounds good. *thumbs up emoji that doesn't exist on YWS*
  





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Sat Aug 19, 2017 10:20 pm
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I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sat Aug 19, 2017 11:10 pm
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So I won't forget:

1. Laurel, fearing the dark beyond mortal measure, rips the bottom of her gown and ties her eyes blindfolded, using drops of water through the cave to imagine clear vision.

2. As Sylvetta beckons the call for battle against the fairies and guardian Wyvern, Laurel fetches a Grand Wyvern Lance from the armory beside the entryway and charges in with Nal'Tor, Sius, and Ker. The blades rip at her white-tide flesh, but her thrust of the spear is overwhelming to the fairies, who take severely to the water magics behind her attacks.

3. As the fight wages on, she collects scraps of armor from the fairies and enchants it into her own clothing to fortify her for melee combat.

4. Despite the screams of her comrades and her excellent echolocation, she is caught off guard by the Wyvern, who slams her into the roof of the cavern, only to be impaled by Dya, trusting Laurel's fallen spear.

5. The Wyvern falls and goes into spasms, knocking away the cavern walls before the tower door, killing the guards outside the tower entry. Ignoring the others seeing to its death, Laurel attempts to generate a healing elixir of the water on the cavern floor.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sun Aug 20, 2017 12:10 am
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Lumi says...



Enjoy the next rotation!
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sun Aug 20, 2017 12:32 am
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Mageheart says...



My first thought upon reading @Lumi's post:

DID HE JUST KILL OFF HIS CHARACTER?!

But, in all seriousness, great post!
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Mon Aug 21, 2017 1:12 pm
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Lumi says...



For a note, no; Laurel's not dead or dying xD

She's just being an internal Tsundere after calling Dya MY LOVE!! publicly.

Behind the scenes note: The final line of the post was originally (B-baka...)
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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