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Tue Dec 13, 2016 5:59 pm
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felidae says...



@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX I love the sound of Jake already! He sounds awesome.

@Oswin1800 great post! Who next?
Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Tue Dec 13, 2016 6:48 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I can post next but I don't want to throw too much on the scene that is already taking place.
  





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Tue Dec 13, 2016 6:54 pm
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You could either come in as a bystander, watching the savaging unfold as the police arrive and remove the werebear from the scene, or you could wait for a while as the characters already there go through the scene, and perhaps meet with them after, when Jake has heard about the mauling via social media. Which would you prefer?
Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Tue Dec 13, 2016 6:59 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I could have him come by as a by stander. I was thinking about him arriving home with groceries and getting arrested since he's got white fur and is a pred. If we are going off of extreme aggression then it wouldn't be too far fetched for him to get arrested as a "Preventive" measure.
  





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Tue Dec 13, 2016 7:10 pm
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felidae says...



That could happen if reports to the police got blurred and they went after two white-furred creatures rather than the actual one.

And if he was arrested, the other characters could be taken in for questioning (because the police will pick on them because of their collars) and can try to free him by vouching that he wasn't there. From there, they could work together to further the plot by getting deep in those conspiracy theories.

So if you post after the arrest has happened, and arrive in the police station as the other characters are in the waiting room?
Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Tue Dec 13, 2016 7:18 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I could post now as the police are arriving. Just have a vehicle from the other direction and an officer arresting him. Jake could be being processed while the others are brought in.
  





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Wed Dec 14, 2016 3:35 pm
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felidae says...



@AnarchyWolf great post! Seb is so cute <3

I'm going to go ahead and post now. @KaiRyu and @alwayshelenaist - there's no rush for your characters, but they'll just have to be stitched into the story at the police station.

EDIT: posted, finally. Right - who next?
Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Thu Dec 15, 2016 2:43 pm
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felidae says...



@Oswin1800 would you like to post now, or would you like Kai or myself to?

@KaiRyu welcome :) I hope you have fun! If you'd like a brief run-though of what's happened up until now, then just say. If you'd like to post either now, or after Oswin then that'd be great to bring Washi into the storyline (she sounds great, by the way :) )

As always, @XxXTheSwordsmanXxX your post was brilliant.
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In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Thu Dec 15, 2016 3:04 pm
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KaiRyu says...



@Oswin could go first if they want to...
“So what? You're another person so of course you look different. What do you need to be ashamed for?” Ciel Phantomhive

"Reality is an illusion, the universe is a hologram buy gold bye!" Bill Cipher
  





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Thu Dec 15, 2016 3:44 pm
JustJasper says...



Sure I could do that. Hopefully today but if you don't want to wait I could post later.
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much?
Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories.
It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

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Thu Dec 15, 2016 5:41 pm
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felidae says...



@Oswin1800 there's no rush. Post whenever it's convenient for you - this SB is moving really quickly :)

Also, @AnarchyWolf, you could post after Oswin and Kai.
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Thu Dec 15, 2016 7:33 pm
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AnarchyWolf says...



@felidae sure.
Don't resist the water. Welcome it.
  





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Fri Dec 16, 2016 9:52 am
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felidae says...



Great post, Oswin1800. Clementine is so cool. <3
So, next order of posting is KaiRyu and then AnarchyWolf. Then we'll see who'd be best to post next.
Tiger, tiger, burning bright
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Fri Dec 16, 2016 12:50 pm
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KaiRyu says...



I have no idea how to tie in my character into this story right now, is she just allowed to do her own thing for now??
“So what? You're another person so of course you look different. What do you need to be ashamed for?” Ciel Phantomhive

"Reality is an illusion, the universe is a hologram buy gold bye!" Bill Cipher
  








Act in the valley so that you need not fear those who stand on the hill.
— Danish proverb