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Fri Dec 16, 2016 1:07 pm
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felidae says...



She can totally do her own thing! Alternatively, she could also be taken into the police station for questioning regarding a savaging (either the one that just happened, or another one) if you want her to get involved with the other characters quickly. If not, then she could meet them later on.
Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Fri Dec 16, 2016 5:59 pm
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KaiRyu says...



I'm sorry if my post was a little it short...
“So what? You're another person so of course you look different. What do you need to be ashamed for?” Ciel Phantomhive

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Fri Dec 16, 2016 6:42 pm
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felidae says...



Not at all! It was really good. I love the sound of Washi already. <3

@AnarchyWolf, take the stage :)
Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
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Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Sun Dec 18, 2016 7:01 pm
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AnarchyWolf says...



Posted :)
Don't resist the water. Welcome it.
  





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Sun Dec 18, 2016 7:59 pm
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felidae says...



@AnarchyWolf great post :)

I have an idea for a possible deepening of the plot, but I wanted all of your opinions before it was added. I was thinking about predator supremacists. As in, predator-types who believe they are superior to prey-types and act violently on those beliefs. I wasn't quite sure how well it would affect the plot our preds redeeming themselves in the eyes of the prey, but it would be something quite interesting to write, in my view.

What do you guys think?
Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Sun Dec 18, 2016 8:15 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



It makes sense to the society that we have. Prey that think Preds are animals and a few that think Preds are the top of the food chain.
  





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Mon Dec 19, 2016 5:47 pm
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AnarchyWolf says...



@felidae I agree. It's believable that something like that would happen. I wouldn't mind making an additional character or two as part of the group to interact with the others, if you'd like? Any ideas on what such a group would name themselves?
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Mon Dec 19, 2016 6:50 pm
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felidae says...



I'll make a character, too. If yours could be female, then that'd be good. Maybe mine could be an alternative love interest for Seb, and he could bring the two groups together. It's likely that the group would have information about the conspiracy, too. I was thinking of having them called something like Carnivora or something else Latin and fancy. Any other ideas?

Who wants to post next?
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Tue Dec 20, 2016 11:27 am
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KaiRyu says...



I'm going to be away for a little while, just thought you guys would like to know that.
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Tue Dec 20, 2016 6:36 pm
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felidae says...



@KaiRyu thanks for telling us :) I hope you have fun where-ever you're going or doing. You'll be missed until you come back.
Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Thu Dec 22, 2016 9:03 pm
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felidae says...



Posted :)

@Oswin1800 do you want to post next about Clementine's interview? Then we can have all of the characters wait up and talk to the Pink Chimichanga, and start investigating the savagings.
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In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Thu Dec 22, 2016 9:08 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



...
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I can see that this "Pink Chimichanga" is going to be a running joke throughout the SB.
  





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Thu Dec 29, 2016 9:18 pm
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felidae says...



After @Oswin1800 posts, and after Oliver has been bought in and they've talked everything over, I was thinking of having a run-in with the pred supremacists to bring them into the plot. Any objections?
Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
  





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Thu Dec 29, 2016 9:22 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Can't say that I see any.
  





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JustJasper says...



Yeah sorry I have been inactive! I have been experiencing technical difficulties lately but they are resolved now. I should be able to post soon.
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It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

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