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Fri Nov 11, 2016 7:49 pm
Persistence says...



Not at all! @ChildOfWriting you are welcome to join anytime ^^
Deep thoughts remind me of unfinished
  





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Sat Nov 12, 2016 2:01 am
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Wolfi says...



Yesss, my western buddy! Welcome!
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Sat Nov 12, 2016 5:56 am
Persistence says...



@Vellichor?
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Sat Nov 12, 2016 6:23 am
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Wolfi says...



Yep! She's the creator of the "A Town Called Jade" western SB. ^^
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Sat Nov 12, 2016 6:28 am
Persistence says...



No, I mean, they changed their name when I tagged them, so I wasn't sure if they saw that they can join anytime.
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Sat Nov 12, 2016 7:02 am
Wolfi says...



Gotcha. d:
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Sat Nov 12, 2016 7:43 am
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Vellichor says...



@Persistence :D Thanks a bunch, I will have a CP up veeery soon!
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Sat Nov 12, 2016 5:44 pm
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Steggy says...



Posted!
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Sat Nov 12, 2016 8:19 pm
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Persistence says...



Hey @Steggy; love your writing. I have a couple of comments, but they're not a big deal. Things essential for survival are extremely cheap, so electricity is almost free. And people would have something like air conditioning. Like, they would take the stuff we have for granted. It's the best way to explain all the gadgets characters can have. But this is okay too.

Also, I already have a plotline for the killer, but I don't have a character yet. So if anyone wants their character to be a villain, pm me and we'll work out a surprise or two. It can also be a new character. And if not, then that's okay. I'll make the villain an npc.
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Sat Nov 12, 2016 8:31 pm
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Steggy says...



Ooh, okay. I wasn't exactly sure how to write that out but thank you for pointing that out! I'll remember that the next time I write.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Sat Dec 03, 2016 12:25 pm
Persistence says...



Hey everyone. Sorry I haven't been able to post; I've been incredibly busy lately. But you're all free to post whenever you want ^^ and to go crazy with it XD
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Sat Dec 03, 2016 12:31 pm
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soundofmind says...



WELL GEE BOY HOWDY FOLKS

YOU'VE GOT YOURSELF A NEW SHERIFF UH, I mean, storybooker, yeah. *coughs* that
Pants are an illusion. And so is death.

  





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Sat Dec 03, 2016 3:29 pm
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Persistence says...



Great post, @soundofmind! Looks like there's a new stranger in town ^^

Welcome aboard ( :
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Thu Jan 05, 2017 12:26 am
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Lumi says...



How would we feel about a WFP jam session to light a fire under this sucker?
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Persistence says...



All in favour like Lumi's post?
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