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Wed Nov 09, 2016 11:23 pm
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Lumi says...



I can definitely have a shot at it.

Get it?

A shot?

Because guns?

No?

Nobody?

Well shoot.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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Wed Nov 09, 2016 11:27 pm
Persistence says...



Quit horsin' around d:

But seriously, that's great.
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Wed Nov 09, 2016 11:49 pm
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Lumi says...



Wolfie said we could do whatever with Rigley, so I killed his sister-in-law. >.>
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Wed Nov 09, 2016 11:55 pm
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Persistence says...



Umm you mean passenger, right?

Nice post, btw. You really wrote it like a western xD it read like it, anyway. I did the characters' voices in my head XP
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Thu Nov 10, 2016 12:56 am
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Wolfi says...



Loved your posts, guys! I'll write a post tomorrow.
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Thu Nov 10, 2016 1:07 am
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Lumi says...



Name changes confuse me endlessly + learning new SB characters.

DIANE'S NAME WAS SAMANTHA UNTIL I WENT TO WRITE SAMANTHA'S PART, GUYS.
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Thu Nov 10, 2016 6:16 am
Persistence says...



That's okay. Maybe Diane is secretly Samantha d:

Okay wolfie ^^ can't wait to see what you got.
Last edited by Persistence on Thu Nov 10, 2016 1:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Nov 10, 2016 12:40 pm
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@Lumi get off my back about the name change, ok
A LITTLE CHANGE NEVER HURT NOBODY.

I'll get a post up at earliest convenience, which could be tomorrow, if we're lucky.
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Thu Nov 10, 2016 12:59 pm
Persistence says...



@passenger that is great! Thanks c:

Wolfie will post too. And @GalaxyUnicornz: really excited to see what you've got.
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Steggy says...



Okey dokey!

Raechael Cuppford is finally done. She's a saloon owner with a pair of evil eyes. I'm looking to post for her whenever I can (which could be this weekend but I don't know).
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Thu Nov 10, 2016 8:07 pm
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Persistence says...



That's okay, steggy ^^ whenever you have the time. This sb is all about being chill and having no pressure xP
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Fri Nov 11, 2016 10:09 am
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Persistence says...



Nice stuff there, @Wolfical

Loved Wolfgang's last line. And the post in general ^^
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Fri Nov 11, 2016 3:00 pm
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Lumi says...



That was so goooood.

One thing I failed to mention that I left in my post in case Sam/Wolf/Chastity wanted to pick up on--Curtis' exact words were that we was at the tavern at the time of the incident, but ain't no son or daughter known the time of the incident at that time.

Or maybe Wolf did. ;D

Or Sam...

Or Curtis! Who is now going to be buried in work for the rest of the SB, so if you find yourself at a roadblock, JUST HAVE HIM FIRE AT A RANDOM VEST OF ARMOR, and it'll be perfectly canon.
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Fri Nov 11, 2016 6:34 pm
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Wolfi says...



Thanks guys!

Ooh Curtis... tricky, tricky.

It would be a tougher argument to make sense of Wolfgang being the murderer, but I can see potential in Sam. ;D
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......Is it too late for me to jump on this train?
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