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Sun Oct 23, 2016 11:20 am
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Persistence says...



Here you may ask questions, give suggestions, share ideas, comment on and discuss the storybook.

This is my first storybook, so please let me know if there's anything I've missed or if there's anything I've done wrong. Have fun writing!
Deep thoughts remind me of unfinished
  





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Sun Oct 23, 2016 4:55 pm
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Lumi says...



Ayyy, figured you needed a gunsmith, so I gave you an ammosmith with fun and motive and complex emotions.

LET'S HAVE SOME FUN. *finger guns*
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sun Oct 23, 2016 8:25 pm
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passenger says...



so first I saw this rule--
Magic is not allowed. No spaceships. No aliens.


--and was like, "aww, you wrote that one for me!"

then I saw this one--
Try not to write novel-length posts. That way we don't intimidate people to stay in the storybook.


--and was like, "lol...I think that one's for me too"

-->> sign me up, cowboy.
"We accept the love we think we deserve." -Stephen Chbosky's Perks of Being a Wallflower
  





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Sun Oct 23, 2016 8:35 pm
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Persistence says...



@Savvy you know it xP

And sure thing! There are no slots you need to reserve, so just make a character whenever you want, and you're in ^^
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Mon Oct 24, 2016 12:06 am
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Wolfi says...



Submitted two characters! I was only going to do Wolfgang, and then I decided to give him a wife, and I liked her. xD
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Mon Oct 24, 2016 12:39 am
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Steggy says...



Hopefully, it isn't too late to join! I'll make my character tomorrow.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Mon Oct 24, 2016 9:52 am
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Persistence says...



@Wolfical both your characters are great ^^

@Steggy if course it isn't too late! You are more thsn welcome to join c:
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Fri Oct 28, 2016 8:43 am
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Hey everyone.

Expect a post (and create ny character) in a few days, just enough time ro get things settled (and fulfill a few obligations. Plus I don't wanna rush things and have this burn out too quick).

@Steggy are you gonna join? It's okay if you don't; I'm just asking to get informed.
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Fri Oct 28, 2016 11:16 am
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Steggy says...



Oh sorry! I've been busy these couple days because of the play and school. I'm still going to join and I'll have the character thingy done somewhat next week
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Fri Oct 28, 2016 11:31 am
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Persistence says...



Awesome! Good to have you ^^

And don't worry about it. This is gonna be a laid-back storybook, so you can post whenever you want. No pressure. Just have fun with it ( :
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Wed Nov 09, 2016 2:48 pm
Persistence says...



Hey. Finally posted, so the storybook is now underway. Feel free to post whenever you want, in no particular order.
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Wed Nov 09, 2016 3:19 pm
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dalisay says...



Watch out...there's a new sheriff in town...and her name is GalaxyUnicornz :D

New to this but I'll get the swing of things!
used to be GalaxyUnicornz
  





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Wed Nov 09, 2016 3:23 pm
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Welcome! there's only room for one sheriff in this here town
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Wed Nov 09, 2016 11:07 pm
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Lumi says...



Who done gone and dog gone got dog gone done shottted daggummit?

/spit
clink!
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Wed Nov 09, 2016 11:21 pm
Persistence says...



//spits

Me.

Is anyone planning on posting? No pressure; you have as much freedom here as you want. I'm just asking so I can plan stuff accordingly.
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