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Flight Risk DT



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Tue Oct 04, 2016 2:30 pm
Gravity says...



Rules

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1. No God modding
2. Your character's crime shouldn't be something small like shoplifting, but also not on the extreme like murder because the prison isn't max or min security, it's somewhere in between.
3. Swearing and violence are to be expected, keep it to a minimum.
4. Sex: follow general storybook rules, but this shouldn't be all that evident because this takes place in juvie, guards will most likely break you up if they see you doing anything.


How this is going to work:

You can have either a male or a female character. However, girls and guys are separated, they are on opposite sides of the facility but have daily activities together like school, work, and meals.

I have done extensive research on what the typical day in a juvenile detention facility is really like. The schedule is as follows.

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7:00: Youths are released for breakfast
8:00: Youths are released back to their cells until the school day begins.
8:30: Youths are released to school.
10:30: Bathroom Break
11:30: Youths are released for lunch
12:15: Youths are released back to their cells for in-cell rest time
1:00: Youths are released back to school
3:00: School ends
3-4:30 Youths may read, watch movies (G or PG movies), or engage in other healthy recreational activities
4:30-5:30 Dinner
5:30-7:30 Youths will complete chores such as cleaning their rooms or the facility in general
7:30-10 Recreational time until lights out


if a prisoner exhibits signs of violent or otherwise insolent behavior, he or she will be put into solitary confinement for 24 hours.
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)
  





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Tue Oct 04, 2016 2:55 pm
Gravity says...



Living Arrangements

The prison is divided into pods based on letters of the alphabet, A-J

Each pod contains 9 cells, each cell holds 2 people. At max capacity, the facility can hold 180 people. Letters A-E are for girls, F-J for guys.

For the sake of this storybook, our characters will all be in the same pods. Girls in A, guys in F.

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And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)
  





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Tue Oct 04, 2016 6:38 pm
HazelGrace16 says...



I can dig it!
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
  





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Tue Oct 04, 2016 8:40 pm
Craz says...



I would like to reserve a spot!
"we'll fasten it with some safety pins and tape and a dream, and you're good to go, honey."
  





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Wed Oct 05, 2016 1:47 am
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@HazelGrace16 @Craz

YAY
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)
  





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Wed Oct 05, 2016 8:35 pm
Megrim says...



I'm interested! Want to see what kind of characters others come up with, though.
  





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Wed Oct 05, 2016 10:18 pm
Gravity says...



@Megrim I'm hoping to see some really unique characters here :)
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)
  





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Sat Oct 08, 2016 2:07 pm
Craz says...



Mine will be in by the end of this week, and if not bug me pls <3
"we'll fasten it with some safety pins and tape and a dream, and you're good to go, honey."
  





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Sun Oct 09, 2016 4:50 pm
Craz says...



Submitted!
"we'll fasten it with some safety pins and tape and a dream, and you're good to go, honey."
  








You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling