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Sat Oct 01, 2016 4:33 pm
sheysse says...



Here is where we outline the plot and ask questions.
  





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Sat Oct 01, 2016 5:15 pm
Mageheart says...



Should our characters' names be their real names, or would it be one they choose upon excepting GOD's plea for help? Also, is it possible for characters to be one gender on Earth and another in the game?
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Sat Oct 01, 2016 5:22 pm
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Also, can I suggest adding an age, other, and gender option for the character template, as well as separating the information for the avatars into different sections?
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Sat Oct 01, 2016 5:25 pm
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sheysse says...



No. Names and gender will stay constant. Male on Earth= Male in GAME. Female in Earth= Female in GAME. That way they keep the basic aspects of their original life. I don't want people to forget that they're only human and that they don't come from the game. They can change their clothing and appearance but don't change their gender and name. Also, remember this is not actually a game. It's just a world resembling one, and I think that allowing gender and name switches would make people forget that.
  





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Sat Oct 01, 2016 5:28 pm
Mageheart says...



Alright! Just wanted to check. :D I was just referring to it as a game because you never supplied a name for the world.
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Sat Oct 01, 2016 5:30 pm
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sheysse says...



Okay, I just change the CT! Hope it works a bit better.

As for a world name, it'll be called GAME.
  





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Sat Oct 01, 2016 5:31 pm
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sheysse says...



Now can we pause and just admire the beauty of GAME dominating the Recent Posts tab?
  





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Sat Oct 01, 2016 5:35 pm
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Alright! And that's so cool. ^_^
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Sat Oct 01, 2016 7:21 pm
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To avoid confusion, I'll state that avatars and characters are not the same. The avatar is a partner formed by your SOUL, and the entire description of your avatar is decided by your SOUL.
  





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Sat Oct 01, 2016 11:33 pm
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Astronomer says...



This looks great. May I join?
  





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Sun Oct 02, 2016 7:16 am
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Poopsie says...



Roles?

After reading the intro I'm still kind of lost. Is their anything you can relate this sb to? Say like a movie or a game? Also, what exactly is this game. Is it like a fantasy game? What kind of mobs spawn? What are some key locations int he game that we may be able to start off at? I also want to elaborate on roles. You have given skills that imply certain roles, but they are few and they don't exactly shape the role. A brief description of each role can definitely suffice. I'm sorry if this came off a little judge, but I see a pretty cool idea and I want to make it more well rounded. Sorry again :p. I hope this helps
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Sun Oct 02, 2016 10:16 am
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No, don't worry about it. I'll explain and hopefully I don't come across as crazy.

Your character whom you post as selects one of four weapons. The weapons are sword (and shield if wanted), bow, staff, and axe. Then they can cast the skills that correspond to their weapon of choice. I. E. Sword= Sword skills. But these are more for worst case scenario. For the most part, their avatar will do the fighting. Avatars are a separate entity that almost in a sense server them. They'll fight for your character, and are even willing to die protecting your character. They are formed from your characters SOUL. If your SOUL is weak, then so is your avatar. But none of the characters have weak SOULs would because then they wouldn't have been asked by GOD to help. Throughout the story, the BOSS will send his personal Incarnators to kill the characters. (As a little side note, most people in GAME just use the weapon and weapon skills. Only the strongest have avatars.)

As for a map, I'll be creating one soon.
  





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Sun Oct 02, 2016 3:48 pm
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Seeing this suspicious storybook being run by a flower who finally seems to have gotten what he wanted...

It fills me with DETERMINATION to keep an eye on you. -_-
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