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Tue Nov 15, 2016 6:20 am
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LordZeus says...



Great I was about to ask about that. I wanted Luke to face the Bogart, you see, I had a whole scene planned. But I can post about that later now, thanks @SirenCymbaline
  





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Thu Nov 17, 2016 5:34 am
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LordZeus says...



Great posts guys! (Sorry for the double post).

Just one thing @Nike, Luke walked in with Robert not Draco. Thanks for mentioning Luke btw.

Ill try and post again soon, I'm happy at how fast paced this is! It's refreshing.

EDIT(Since I didn't want to triple post): Posted again! @Nike @Remington38 @SirenCymbaline I mentioned all your characters in my post. Apologies to all my fellow Gryffindors, I had most of this written up already, so I didn't mention the dueling class. I promise I will mention it next post. Go Gryffindor!
  





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Thu Nov 17, 2016 11:40 pm
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ty7lucky says...



Finally got around to posting, tell me if there's anything I should change.
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Fri Nov 18, 2016 5:13 am
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LordZeus says...



Greats posts guys! Hey btw since the next day for our characters is Sunday, and I believe that in the books, Sundays were free (Saturdays too as I recently found out, sorry for starting the Saturday as a school day in my post. Perhaps it could be a special working Saturday? Lame, I know. Sorry!). So, I was thinking that perhaps on Sunday the students could be allowed into Hogsmeade. That might be a nice new thing for our characters to experience. What do you think of that, @Nike?
  





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Fri Nov 18, 2016 7:41 am
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SirenCymbaline says...



@ty7lucky Gavin's boggart is really creative, and I like it, but I think you ended it a little early. It would have been nice to see how he reacts to the Boggart. Does he try Riddikulus? does it work? what happened there?
otherwise I think you did a great job.
  





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Fri Nov 18, 2016 7:43 am
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Nike says...



@LordZeus that's a great idea. lol it's kay shit happens. They needed an extra learning day xD


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Fri Nov 18, 2016 2:00 pm
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ty7lucky says...



Thanks for the suggestion @SirenCymbaline.
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Sat Nov 19, 2016 2:14 am
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SirenCymbaline says...



@Nike, about that duelling class you mentioned in the Storybook Challenges thread, would it be a good idea to have that in the story's current working Saturday?

In case anyone didn't read that post, here it is reposted.

For my Hogwarts Students and The Years Will Lived With Harry Potter, here's your challenge.

Since we haven't used a lot of magic, let's make a dueling class with Remus Lupin and Severus Snape as your teachers. I wanna 'hear' the wands, so please use your onomatopoeia's, they are your friends. Class is for all wizards, come by! The house that wins the most duels will get 100 points towards their house!

Points: 3 Points (for the winning house members)

Posts: 2 posts per person (at least)
Last edited by SirenCymbaline on Sun Nov 20, 2016 6:13 am, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Sat Nov 19, 2016 2:48 am
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Nike says...



@SirenCymbaline we sure can!!!
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Sat Nov 19, 2016 8:11 pm
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Oswin1800 says...



Working on a post it will be up today.
I also think it might be good to make sure we include people like Gavin in our posts so he doesn't slip through the cracks.
Also if your characters ever need someone to talk to Rain will not turn them away.

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Sun Nov 20, 2016 9:07 am
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SirenCymbaline says...



Tip- the Harry Potter Wiki is your friend.
http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page

You can search up and read up on spells, and what their effects are, it's invaluable information for any scene that involves magic.
It's good for more than just checking up on the canon (though that's great too.)
  





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Sun Nov 20, 2016 3:11 pm
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LordZeus says...



Might post next. Also, I noticed that @Vellichor had a character but hasn't posted for her. Are you still in this Vellichor?
  





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Sun Nov 20, 2016 5:14 pm
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ty7lucky says...



I submitted a new post if it's too violent or you think we shouldn't have the half blood prince's book tell me.
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Sun Nov 20, 2016 5:32 pm
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LordZeus says...



@ty7lucky nice post. Just one thing, I'd prefer (and so would my character) that you call him Luke. That's the name he's known by around the school, and the name he prefers. He hates his original name and keeps its knowledge and usage as low as he can. So do you mind changing Lucius to Luke please? I'd appreciate it very much.
  





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Sun Nov 20, 2016 5:37 pm
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ty7lucky says...



I'll do that right now
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